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Breen

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  1. tough talk for someone within prop-kill distance
  2. thats literally a nerf because tranqing them is bounds easier than killing them
  3. Score: 95/100 Grade: A Lore: 20/20 You followed 939's lore very well, and even how white noise works irl, as it is able to disrupt sound for some people. It would definitely affect a creature with an acute sense of hearing. Creativity: 15/20 Definitely not saying you copied this test, as its so old, but this idea has been done before. You did forge the idea into something better, however. Presentation: 20/20 Absolutely beautiful test log, contrasting colors without conflicting, well organized, color-coordinated dialogue. Writing: 40/40 No spelling mistakes, grammar mistakes, and used complex wording and sentence structure.
  4. Breen

    Buff the Negev

    negev so weak i tried to kill MTF with it from the bottom of EZ ramp to the top and he no die it misses too much buff negev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  5. Score: 73/100 Grade: C- Lore: 20/20 1048 would definitely try to make another instance of 1048 out of something so malleable as raw dough. 1048 would also most likely try to eat the bread if it believed it would be "cute" and get it attention. Creativity: 13/20 Creative idea to see how 1048 would react with food, and to see if it has some way to sense heat. However, it seemed you didn't even go into detail at all about the whole "reaction to warmth" part of the test, and instead only focused on the part with food. Presentation: 10/20 The observation section of the test log is completely blank, the analysis/conclusion doesn't analyze or conclude anything, simply restates what was said in the log. The text could use some formatting. Writing: 30/40 No spelling or grammar errors, however, sentences written are short and seem informal throughout the entire test log. I give this test log a rating of Standard.
  6. -support give people time to adapt to self breaching, it is fairly new
  7. so basically just the suggestion with extra steps
  8. +support 096's self breach prevention is the stupidest thing i have ever seen, if the door malfunctions then it makes more sense since 096 does one of two things while docile, sits and cries or wanders and cries.
  9. we already do whenever we can, still rampant with minges and it literally does nothing
  10. Score: 92/100 Grade: A- Lore: 18/20 Perfectly followed SCP-038's lore of duplicating anything that touches the bark. Only docked points because it does have a weight limit of 200 pounds (90.91 kg), and it would probably have been a good idea to log the D-Class' weight in the log. Creativity: 14/20 A perfect example of an event SCP test log. Good job doing an event SCP, however a lot of the trials seemed unfulfilling, like the SCP-999 trial and D-Class trial, sure they got duplicated as expected, however, there was no further investigation in said results. Like: Did the clones 999s have the same anomalous properties as the parent 999? Were the cloned D-Class alive and have the same memories or personality as the original D-Class? etc. Presentation: 20/20 Beautiful test log. Well organized and easy to follow. I enjoy the fact you put clear, relevant pictures in as a visual aide alongside a caption. Writing: 40/40 No spelling or grammar errors, complex and vivid sentences and language.
  11. It is, you cant just call hands up just because you feel like it. You can get punished for that. Also it will be difficult to fit this into 1 advert, Ritz.
  12. +support ive been surprised recently by your new-found activity in research. You still minge but its the fun type of minging and its at appropriate times. Your test logs are very good from what I've seen, been with research since March (wanted to correct you on that) and I feel you are finally ready for command. Lets just hope you drop your worship for the Scarlet King and find peace with the gods of science.
  13. Score: 86/100 Grade: B+ Lore: 20/20 Test definitely follows lore, as SCP-096 enrages when direct eye contact is made. Creativity: 20/20 A very creative test idea. I like the idea of testing to see if certain parts 096's face can trigger his state of distress and if some cannot. Presentation: 16/20 I appreciate the use of a google doc, and the format is well organized and easy to follow. However, the basic format was still used, you are allowed to skew from the format as long as you cover the basics and make them evident. Writing: 30/40 No spelling or grammar errors. However, sentences were short and a little simple. I give this test log a grade of Quality.
  14. Score: 75/80 Grade: A- (94%) Lore: ---- I don't feel it appropriate to grade lore on an interview with such creative licensing, because most of this interview was your own theories; the lore was not the main focus of the interview. Creativity: 20/20 You definitely expressed a lot of creativity when you created this interview, as well as the previous one you did. Interviews have a lot of opportunities to express creativity and you definitely seized those opportunities. Presentation: 15/20 I like the formatting you used in the google doc, and it was very organized and easy to follow. However, looking at your previous interview log I was disappointed you were not consistent with the interview format, and it makes the current interview log seem rushed. Writing: 40/40 No spelling or grammar errors, complex sentences; no dead verbs. You also used a lot of vivid language.
  15. doesnt make it ok to nerf the SCP. it takes a while to breach, is a gold+ job, and is a keter class SCP. It feels so unsatisfying to be recontained with only like 1 kill because it never registers the hits.
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