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Breen

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  1. stacked on top of his SWEP's shitty hitreg where it takes 8-10 hits to actually register a hit -Support
  2. you already -supported this post
  3. Score: 97/100 Grade: A+ Lore: 20/20 You wrapped your hypothesis and test log around the way 1162 works very well. The observation I can't really grade based on lore since it's your own creativity creating a conclusion. Creativity: 20/20 Definitely, enjoy the creativity you put into this test log, just it being an 1162 test alone gets it some bonus creativity points. Presentation: 17/20 I enjoy the google doc, and the format was used well. Test log is well organized and categorized. Only issue with me is that the log seems a little drab or bland. I enjoy the picture included. Writing: 40/40 No spelling or grammar errors. Well constructed sentences; used complex vocab. I give this test log a grade of Quality.
  4. Score: 71/100 Grade: C- Lore: 20/20 SCP-999 does, in fact, prefer candy, or "human treats" over any other food. It even rejects any other type of food. Creativity: 7/20 Since the "treats" you used were very vague, its best to assume you meant candy and just common cat or dog treats. This wouldn't be very creative, as it is stated on the wiki page "...SCP-999 seems to love all animals (especially humans), refusing to eat any meat...SCP-999’s diet consists entirely of candy and sweets, with M&M’s™ and Necco™ wafers being its favorites." implying it does not eat anything else but candy. Presentation: 14/20 Used the format well, but the observation section is oddly formatted and the text boxes before and after seem in the way and out of place. Writing: 30/40 No spelling or grammar errors, but the sentences written seem somewhat basic and each section is fairly short. I give this test log a grade of Standard.
  5. Score: 97/100 Grade: A+ Lore: 20/20 You aced both 999 and 513 perfectly, with 999 having immense calming capabilities, even calming down 682, and 513 never truly being able to be cured, aside from termination. Creativity: 20/20 Creative cross test, I enjoy your idea of trying to utilize SCP-999 to possibly create an alternative cure to 513, like if high-level personnel is exposed to it, as opposed to termination. Presentation: 17/20 Google doc is organized well and categorized, making it easy to distinguish parts of your test log. However, it is a little bland. Writing: 40/40 No spelling errors or grammar errors.
  6. WELCOME BACK TERNITH I MISSED YOU
  7. If it becomes something like maynard then you'd probably already be required to have research as a life
  8. +support all ive seen are mingey dr brights, its gotten to the point where bright can't even leave bunks without being stopped. no one plays dr bright correctly, he isn't some 682-breaching, enemy of the foundation like maynard, he is a very good foundation doctor, and contributes a lot to the foundation. He just does not have much regard for his own life due to his immortality. I think restricting Dr. Bright to those who are more experienced with SCP and can prove themselves capable of not just blatantly breaking server rules, it would make Dr. Bright much more enjoyable to have around instead of him being a huge burden.
  9. Score: 88/100 Grade: B+ Lore: 20/20 It has been shown various times 096 prefers the quickest way to its target, and it shows no response to exhaustion or physical damage. So your test followed lore quite well. Creativity: 20/20 This test is very creative, as it can help us understand if 096 is intelligent and possesses problem solving capabilities. Presentation: 14/20 The test log was a little drab, and the pictures did look a little off placed. However the log followed the format and the pictures helped visualizing the test setup. Writing: 34/40 Only a few minor grammar errors, however the log was kind of short.
  10. Score: 100/100 Grade: A+ Lore: 20/20 This does not go against lore in my opinion and is a creative way to go about the results. Creativity: 20/20 A very good application of 999's gel, very creative and I have not seen anything like it before. Presentation: 20/20 Beautifully organized google doc and forum post. Writing: 40/40 No grammar/spelling mistakes.
  11. Score: 87/100 Grade: B+ Lore: 20/20 Creativity: 15/20 While its already common knowledge 999 is very mobile due to its gelatinous state, you did a good job applying it to practical uses like recovery or scouting. However, SCP-999 is too great of an asset to be put into dangerous situations. Presentation: 15/20 A well-organized google doc, the only problem is the first part with oddly formatted text, like really small text next to really big text. Writing: 37/40 Minor spelling errors and grammar errors. Overall I give this test log a grade of Quality.
  12. Score: 68/100 Grade: D+ Lore: 20/20 You followed SCP-999's lore very well. Creativity: 13/20 This test was very uh... creative. especially MJ-1. However, the subject of the test was a little weak, at least what I could take from the log as being a test question. Presentation: 5/20 The test is very hard to follow, and not organized well. It seems more like a story or an essay than a test log. Subheadings and sections would have made this test a lot better and easier to follow along and get the important parts of the test. Writing: 30/40 Only a few spelling errors. Overall I give this test a grade of Standard.
  13. Score: 84/100 Grade: B- Lore: 15/20 You pretty much got everything right about SCP-066, except the shock collar part. SCP-066 is composed of yarn, given that it is wool yarn, wool is a very good insulator. So the shock collar would have no effect whatsoever on 066. Creativity: 13/20 Creative to test if SCP-066 is able to be trained like a pet, which could indicate sentience, however the other part is kind of meaningless. Presentation: 16/20 Google doc looks very nice, however, the lack of subheadings makes the document a little unorganized. Subheadings would be good to separate each section of the test and make it easier to follow. Writing: 40/40
  14. +Support MTF command shouldn’t be eager to sacrifice themselves, d class should be taken. Also 106 is keter, making him more difficult to recontain makes sense.
  15. Score: 100/100 Grade: A+ Lore: 20/20 From what I understood from reading both articles of said SCPs, you pretty much nailed how both SCPs work. Creativity: 20/20 Very creative cross-test, especially since they are offsite SCPs. I like how you found two nature-based SCPs and found a way to combine their abilities, both being plant matter enhancement and augmentation. Presentation: 20/20 Very well put together google doc. It was easy to follow, well organized, and the sections were distinguished well. Writing: 40/40 No errors from what I saw. I easily give this test a grade of Quality.
  16. Score: 96/100 Grade: A+ Lore: 20/20 You nailed how 912 works perfectly, and you applied it very well to your test. Good job. Creativity: 18/20 While the fact 912 attacks armed, non-uniformed personnel is common knowledge, I do not think I have seen a test before assessing if 912 has priorities when it comes to attacking personnel. Presentation: 20/20 It is quite apparent you put a lot of effort and passion into this test, not much else needs to be said. Writing: 39/40 Only a few minor spelling errors in the video and document. I give this test a grade of Quality.
  17. 076-2's sword barely hits anyway so i dont think this is necessary
  18. Score: 63/100 Grade: D- Lore: 15/20 SCP-999 does dislike conflicts; however, it has shown to go out of its way to stop them. It sitting around watching would not be likely. Creativity: 5/20 This test idea has been done numerous times. A good example to improve could be physically blocking SCP-999 from the conflict to see how it would react. Presentation: 10/20 You forgot the name section of the format, so right now I kind of have to guess who you are based on the picture and jr test log chat in the discord. The picture is very large and disrupts the order of the test log a lot. Writing: 33/40 Punctuation errors, some sentences don't make sense or are worded weird. I give this test a Standard grade. Also, I would like to direct you to this section of the Research SOP: DO. NOT. DRUG. SCPS.
  19. Score: 28/100 Grade: F Lore: 0/20 See Bottom. Creativity: 0/20 See Bottom. Presentation: 8/20 Sections were short, random spaces, test log unappealing to look at. Writing: 20/40 Capitalization errors, grammar errors, illegible sentences. At least the log is legible for the most part. For the lore and creativity section, this test does not even seem to involve SCP-1162. If this is supposed to be an extension on a previous test, this should have just been included with the other one. It was not deserving of a test of its own; there is too little SCP related content. The only thing that seems related to SCP-1162 was the fact the rock came from it. I give this test a rating of Sub-Standard.
  20. Score: 64/100 Grade: D- Lore: 0/20 How did you even get a picture of SCP-513-1? It is not visible to anyone except those who have heard the bell ring and only those who have heard it ring. Creativity: 13/20 Would be a creative test if it would actually work. It is always nice to learn more potential anomalous abilities. Presentation: 11/20 D Class' names are unnecessarily long and in the way, sections are kind of short and undetailed. Writing: 40/40 No grammar/spelling errors.
  21. What do you want to see? - Changing the recontainment procedure for SCP-076-2 to termination, and reducing his health to around 3-5k Why should we add it? - Currently, SCP-076-2 is extremely easy to recontain, and his SWEP's hitreg makes it impossible to fight back. Not only would changing his recontainment procedure would give 076-2 a better chance to not worry about being recontained within the first encounter with MTF, but it would also align with lore a lot better, as SCP-076-2 is contained in a "killing corridor." What are the advantages of having this? - Making SCP-076-2 more desireable to play, people would actually engage in fights knowing they won't get recontained immediately and aligning with lore is always good when it comes to RP servers. Who is it mainly for? - SCP players, donators. Links to any content - N/A
  22. Lore Name: Breen Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:78650607 Rank: RAM
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