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Disgraced Merchant

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  1. Grade: 61% |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Quality: Standard |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Lore: 10/20 You did not do much Background Research except for the base details of the SCP. You did not explain what this SCP is. This Test Log needs a lot more detail. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Creativity: 9/20 This test has been done multiple times on SCP-1025. We already know that SCP-1025 is capable of giving anyone who reads it a disease. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Presentation: 12/20 Although the post is very organized, the post lacks any visuals or evidence. It is bland. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Writing: 30/40 Although the writing was very short, it did not have any dramatic grammar errors. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| You have the right idea, just think of a more conclusive and informative test next time. Remember, we come up with tests to improve the containment methods of these SCP's and further the Betterment of Mankind. Think of something to find the out more about the anomalous capabilities of these SCP's. If you ever have any questions or need help with a Test Log, you can come talk to me or any other Research Command and we will help you out!
  2. Grade: 97% |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Quality: Quality |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Lore: 20/20 I haven't seen a test on SCP-294 this in-depth in awhile. I really enjoyed how you genuinely explored the anomalous capabilities of SCP-294. You even included a little bit of background lore of a D-Class! Great Work. |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Creativity: 19/20 I'm almost certain this test has not been done before. I've only seen tests on if SCP-294's drinks can affect people physically, not mentally. I'd like to see more of this. |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Presentation: 20/20 Creative Format. Love how you made it look like a file. |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Writing: 38/40 The writing was very organized and to the point. |-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| I wish to see more in-depth tests like this! This is what the Research Department should be discovering; the anomalous capabilities of our SCP's, not just if a D-Class dies or not. Amazing work! If you ever have any questions or need help with a Test Log, you can come talk to me or any other Research Command and we will help you out!
  3. +support - Pristine Gun Handling Skills - Does anything to protect others around her
  4. +Support - EXTREMELY Creative - Does In-Depth Events - Can do very immersive events
  5. SCP-106, SCP-096, and SCP-096-1 Cross Test https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-TsOxyIYIvRLmxOwbiOijHrMAkFHP6cB/view?usp=sharing My First Mass Test! ENJOY!
  6. +Support This person is a great leader and will do amazing as an O5 Medical staff! She's done great in everything else that she has been involved in, Kami is the perfect fit!
  7. Whats up Meowjam?
  8. Incident Report SCP-682-J: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lXGqs-Iw06ykvuaEFOsXiE4VKS7iPD1d/view?usp=sharing
  9. New Addendum: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sJMGG_JcTBOxGp01FGV4fpZ7aXNIVtSr/view?usp=sharing *Updated* Full Anomalous Wardrobe Log: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1dtoVQOevZccyPwjDs_k0swa0qmc4vzre/view STAY TUNED
  10. Grade: 62% |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Quality: Standard |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Lore: 10/20 You did not do much Background Research except for the base details of the SCP. You did not explain what this SCP is, nor did you explain what it is fully capable of doing. This Test Log needs a lot more detail. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Creativity: 9/20 This test has been done multiple times of SCP-066. Also, there was no real conclusion to this test. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Presentation: 13/20 Besides the Containment Class and Clearance Level format you put in the beginning, which I liked, there were no unique details in your Test Log. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Writing: 30/40 Although the writing was very short, it did not have any dramatic grammar errors. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| You have the right idea, just think of a more conclusive and informative test next time. Remember, we come up with tests to improve the containment methods of these SCP's and further the Betterment of Mankind. If you ever have any questions or need help with a Test Log, you can come talk to me or any other Research Command and we will help you out!
  11. Give the 076-2 an option whether to accept the challenger or not, so its not just a forced recontain. Either 076 accepts the D Class and then goes into his chamber (RC) or 076 denies the D Class. Now if this happens, MTF would have staged an ambush just in case he doesnt accept, so when he comes back out, they mow him down from across the hallway (Terminated, if it works)
  12. Grade: 59% |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Quality: Sub-Standard |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Lore: 10/20 I really liked what you did by including SCP-914 and the eye drops it produces when it is set to 'Very Fine". It made it a very unique test. The Background Research could have been more specific. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Creativity: 18/20 Like I said, using an object created by SCP-914 on someone viewing SCP-1025 was very creative. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Presentation: 8/20 Your presentation was clustered and disorganized. It was also very short. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Writing: 23/40 The writing had lots of spelling errors and grammatical errors. I also noticed that you never mentioned what page you opened to in SCP-1025 |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| The test idea was great, but there are some things you can work on to create an amazing test log: 1. Make sure that you take your time in writing your test log and that you add all the detail that you can. You do not want the reader getting confused. 2. Double check for grammar errors and run on sentences. 3. Keep your Test Log organized and polished. Make sure you make it look appealing. If you ever have any questions or need help with a Test Log, you can come talk to me or any other Research Command and we will help you out!
  13. Grade: 85% |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Quality: Standard |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Lore: 19/20 Everything was mostly accurate. SCP-066 does not attack anyone. It only emits a loud sound that shatters your eardrums. Also, there could have been more information added in the Background Research section . |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Creativity: 19/20 I haven't observed anyone attempting to analyze SCP-066's sentience/intelligence. You testing if it was capable of speaking or taking orders was very smart. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Presentation: 10/20 You had some a really nice Font, but that was about it. You should add some more pictures, detail, and information to your test logs. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| Writing: 37/40 A few grammatical errors, but writing was clear and straight to the point. Just write a little more next time. |-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| This was pretty good for your first test. Just make sure to add more Background Research and you should be good to go. Keep thinking of in-depth questions that can be answered and you'll do just fine!
  14. - SUPPORT Death Row Inmates that have been transferred to an Underground Maximum Security Facility would have NO CHANCE to become a Gangster or some shit
  15. + support My character REALLY needs a Threapist
  16. Lore Name: Karen B Steam ID: STEAM_1:1:50916788 Rank: Supervisor Activity Level: active, sure that sounds right F I R S T
  17. +Support I've seen the Doc get angry When he doesn't get his D-Class, he should be able to make a certain amount of 049-2's before becoming calm (lets say 3-5). When he is NOT calm, or "Furious", FearRP should not apply. This makes him a huge threat.. because you cant shoot him (FailRP), so you'll just have to run away from him or persuade to get him the certain amount D-Class he needs to calm down. The player can RP and comply with the MTF (and turn on them at anytime) or go on a spree and get the certain amount of "patients" he needs until he can calm down. Either way, as long as he gets that certain amount of 049-2's, he will become calm again. While he is NOT calm, or "Furious", ... hes untouchable. Just pay attention to his Breach timer and requests to solve this rampage. Don't mess with the Doc. that's just my take on it... Do with that as you will.
  18. +/- Support Heres Why: Nothing wrong with the player model EXCEPT for it is the same one being used for SCP-343 on Concordia's GMOD SCPRP server. I feel like we would want to be a UNIQUE SCPRP Roleplay. I actually suggest we use playermodels of someone with a beard since SCP-343 looks like this: We could use this player model: https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=946046600 Or Zeus player models that look very similar: option 1 - https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1586403940 option 2 - https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=460772855
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