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+/- support, i mean it sounds like a good idea, but levels just become useless at a certain point

Grade: Creativity: 30/35. Bit of a standard idea, although I won't dock too many points because of that. There is only so much you can do with the same 15 SCPs. Presentation: 15/25. I think that you should write your tests on a google doc instead of just writing on the forums. I would also like it if you removed the areas that are a part of the natural format. It makes the log look not that good to me. Writing: 20/40 I'm noticing a lot of areas with a lack of capitals, and some areas in the audio log that seem a bit robotic. Test quality: Standard Extra Notes: I think that you should do 2 things to improve your logs. 1. Run them through grammarly. As I've stated a few times before, I think that you [and some others] should use this program to fix those writing errors that you can't catch. 2. Use SCPs that are not in game. Asterisk, I feel like you have gotten to the point where you have been there, done that with the SCPs in game. I think that you should sit down for a bit, and find an SCP that is interesting to you [it can be any SCP] read it through, and make a good, quality log. @asteriskmonkey

I mean +/-supports are mainly so SMT can see the community’s opinion on a post. Most of the time it just comes down to SMT’s decision, but they do look at community input.

Grade: 90 Creativity: 35/35. I love this idea, and I think the execution was great! Presentation: 20/25. Bit of a standard log, and I would've liked some pictures in the actual log instead of just on the forums post. Writing: 35/40. I noticed a few small errors here and there, but nothing serious. Test quality: Good Extra Notes: As I stated in the presentation grade, I would've liked some visual stimuli in the actual log, but the lack of it didn't ruin the test or anything serious. It's just the smaller details that I tend to notice and appreciate.

-support this would make it real gambling, as you can buy the money with real money. And its kind of illegal for minors [the majority of the playerbase] to gamble

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Grade: 52/100 Creativity: 25/35 Standard questions, would've liked a bit more creativity with your questions Presentation: 17/25 Standard, though your audio log was in a different font then the rest of the log, and that really stood out. Writing: 10/40 Ok. This writing [no offense] was awful. I noticed two periods outside of the format total. The grammar was not good, and I quite frankly found this a bit hard to read. Test quality: Poor. Extra Notes: I think you need to refine your skills heavily. There is a website called grammarly that i think your writing could benefit from.

people get bored and move on, or for other reasons.

RCF and CCs should be 3 minutes

Grade: 80/100 Creativity: 35/35 I love this idea, and I haven't seen it done before Presentation: 15/25 It could be client-side, but the format used on this test had a few issues with random indentations. Please comment with a screenshot of your side so I can confirm if it is client side. Until then, this is the grade. Writing: 35/40 I noticed one or two gramatical errors in your test. I recommend putting your logs through this application called https://app.grammarly.com/ to fix the ones you can't catch before posting Test quality: Standard Extra Notes: I think this test could've benefited from some screenshots, or a video recording of how you did the actual RP. Other than that, good work!

Your In-game: Bionicle/Bruhmobile Your SteamID: STEAM_0:0:109100837 The admin's name in-game: Chief The admin's steam name (If you know it): [GL] Chief What warning did you receive: Player Diss Evidence of the warn (REQUIRED): Why do you think this warn was false: Staff admitted it was false, and told me to appeal it. Any extra information:

Grade: 90 Creativity: 30/35 A creative idea. Presentation: 20/25 Like the format, but it's a bit rough on the eyes [i'm a bit nocturnal and white hurt me eyes but its fine[ Writing: 40/40 No errors I noticed, and I liked your word choice. Test quality: Great Extra Notes: Liked your audio log

Grade: 70 Creativity: 30/35 Haven't seen this done before Presentation: 25/25 I love the format used for this test! Writing: 25/40 I noticed some areas that could benefit from some extra punctuation such as commas. Test quality: Good. Creative idea, just try to make it a bit more serious, like not having a burger king foot lettuce meme as the test.

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@[GL] Bazooka make this a suggestion in the CI discord, and if HCMD like it then itll come here

no format, also unless you can make a new swep, the live with it. -support

-support staff dont use witnesses, so this would be so hard to enforce, as most people dont record 24/7, and

Sorry about the wait in between the last part and this one, I've been a bit busy lately. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TsuToNEpVvrO3QrXK3LOnCxg21sZJua34A1LefQOOUU/edit?usp=sharing