Unfortunately your application is very short and not written as well as it could be, so this is gonna be a minus support from me, next time you write an application I recommend asking people to help you on it so that it could be the best it could possibly be, also for a promotion as big as becoming an officer I recommend putting way more effort into the application because as a VCMDR myself I want my officers to be hardworking and give effort into helping the battalion and if you cant even put effort into the application then that shows you will give the same amount of effort in game.