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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 5 /20 This test has been done to death Presentation: 10/20 This document is really short and lacks any real detail Writing: 30/40 No obvious errors, just lack of detail TOTAL: 65/100 Grade: D Notes: Do not be upset. Try to come up with more detail's next time
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 10 /20 Not exactly the most creative test in the world Presentation: 10/20 This document is really short and lacks any real conclusion. Writing: 20/40 You could have at least tried the test again to get conclusive results. TOTAL: 60/100 Grade: D Notes: Do not be upset. Try the test again and come up with quality results
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 15 /20 This is not the most original test idea. Presentation: 10/20 Very basic document. Nothing really stands out Writing: 35/40 Minor Grammar errors. Also be sure to write your SCP's as SCP-###. TOTAL: 80/100 Grade: B Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done.
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can SCP-999, SCP-500 or, SCP-294. anything stop SCP-513
Tomato replied to Normal_Bagel's topic in Foundation Test Logs
Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 20 /20 Very creative. Well done Presentation: 10/20 The document was a bit short. You could have added a lot more to the actual test log. Writing: 30/40 Minor Grammar errors. Also some inconsistencies in your SCP naming. TOTAL: 80/100 Grade: B- Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done. -
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I cant grade this because i dont have access to the document. Make it public please
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 20 /20 I do enjoy a good cross test. Full points there. Presentation: 10/20 The document was a bit short. You could have added alot more to the actual test log. Writing: 35/40 Minor Grammar errors. TOTAL: 85/100 Grade: B Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done.
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 20 /20 I really enjoyed the concept behind this test. It's gross what happened but it's also funny. Presentation: 15/20 Make sure to bold the different sections of your test, otherwise it all just kinda runs together into a long sentance. Writing: 35/40 I only took off points here because the document is a bit short and there are very minor grammar errors. TOTAL: 90/100 Grade: A- Notes: Very creative
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y12c9nJQD34PHIrQIHuHQPATxRxGUrOMJJmneK_CiTk/edit?usp=sharing
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Lore Name: tomato Steam ID: PotatoPie (dont know my steam id) Rank: Research Supervisor Activity Level: 10/10
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 20 /20 I really enjoyed the concept behind this test. It's silly but thats what makes it fun Presentation: 20/20 I couldnt open the document but if its anything like your other test im sure it was fine Writing: 35/40 I only took off points here because the document is a bit short TOTAL: 95/100 Grade: A Notes: Very creative. I enjoyed
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 15/20 This test has been done before Presentation: 20/20 I can tell you put alot of effort into this document. Well done Writing: 30/40 I took points off here because the document is rather short. there could be alot more in the observation section. TOTAL: 85/100 Grade: D- Notes: The style of the document is nice. Keep up the good work
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 10/20 This isnt very creative. This test has been done before Presentation: 10/20 It's a basic document. There isnt much too it. Writing: 30/40 Rather short document. There could be alot more written here. TOTAL: 70/100 Grade: C- Notes:Do not be upset by the grade. Instead learn from it and come back with an even better test. I think more can be done with this test. Come back and try it again.
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 10/20 This isnt very creative. Of course armor would help protect against a bullet Presentation: 10/20 Its a short document. Writing: 20/40 Some grammar errors in the observation section. There could have been more in the observation section. TOTAL: 60/100 Grade: D- Notes:Do not be upset by the grade. Instead learn from it and come back with an even better test. I think more can be done with this test. Come back and try it again.
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cross testing between SCP-008-1 and SCP-049
Tomato replied to Normal_Bagel's topic in Foundation Test Logs
Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 15/20 Pretty sure this has been done before, however i cant remember where i have seen it. Presentation: 5/20 Pretty basic presentation. Nothing special. Also, you lost points because the observation section is so short. you could have had alot more. Writing: 35/40 Some grammar errors TOTAL: 75/100 Grade: C -
Lore: 20 /20 This follows the lore pretty well Creativity: 20 /20 I dont remember seeing this type of test before. So you get points for that Presentation: 20/20 Presentation is fine. Lots of detail. I appreciate you including so much detail. Writing: 40/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors TOTAL: 100/100 Grade: A+ Notes: Keep up the good work. I see great things in your future.
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Lore: 20 /20 This follows the lore pretty well Creativity: 15/20 This test has been done plenty of times before. that is the sole reason for point loss. Presentation: 20/20 I love any test that has a video accompanying it. It just shows you went the extra mile for your tests. Writing: 40/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors TOTAL: 95/100 Grade: A Notes: Love the video. Keep up the good work
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Lore: 20 /20 This follows the lore pretty well Creativity: 15/20 Not the most original test idea in the world. Presentation: 10/20 There could be a lot more detail in this. There isnt really any detail in what SCP-173 did to the class D Writing: 35/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors. I took points off for the short length. TOTAL: 80/100 Grade: B- Notes: You mainly lost points for the lack of detail. Don't be afraid to add more detail to your test logs.
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Lore: 20 /20 This follows the lore pretty well Creativity: 18/20 I took two points off because i am pretty sure this test has been done many times before. However, i am a fan of 173 cross tests so i added back a few points. Presentation: 20/20 Going the extra mile to do a video warrants extra points in my book. Well done. Writing: 40/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors TOTAL: 98/100 Grade: A+ Notes: Well done. I love the video portion
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Lore: 20 /20 This follows the lore pretty well Creativity: 15/20 While not the most creative test, the idea of studying the subject after getting the stone disease is neat. Presentation: 10/20 There could be a lot more detail in this. Having just one sentence for your observation is a bit too small of an amount. Writing: 40/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors TOTAL: 85/100 Grade: B Notes: You mainly lost points for the lack of detail. Don't be afraid to add more detail to your test logs.
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SoundlessBowl24's SCP 1162 test logs.
Tomato replied to [GL] SoundlessBowl24's topic in Foundation Test Logs
Lore: 20 /20 I'm not sure this follows the lore. SCP-008 has a 100% infection rate so for the class D to not experience symptoms right away is bizarre. Creativity: 10/20 Not the most creative test. Pulling out items from 1162 is the basis of every test. Dont be afraid to think outside the box on your tests. Presentation: 20/20 I like the time log style for what happened. Over all very well designed. Writing: 40/40 No obvious spelling or grammar errors TOTAL: 90/100 Grade: A- Notes: Not bad for your first test. Dont be afraid to be a bit more creative with your tests. Overall well done -
Lore: 15/20 I'm not sure this follows the lore. SCP-008 has a 100% infection rate so for the class D to not experience symptoms right away is bizarre. Creativity: 20/20 I like the idea of doing essentially three tests at once. I also like the idea of studying prolonged exposure. Well done there. Presentation: 15/20 I feel as though the document kinda cuts off in the observation section. I felt as though there was more to be said about what happened. I could be wrong but a little more detail wouldn't go amiss. That being said the document follows the proper presentation procedures. Writing: 30/40 Some grammar errors. No obvious spelling errors. Make sure to capitalize at the beginning of your sentences. TOTAL: 80/100 Grade: B- Notes: Try redoing this test and see what else you can find. I am interested to see what other results you can gather. -Tomato
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Lore: 20/20 Follows the lore quite well. No issues there. Creativity: 10/20 Not the most creative test. We knew SCP-173 would kill the class D. I dont think the insult really changed that fact. Presentation: 18/20 Its a short document.Granted there isn't much to be said but a little more detail never hurt. Exactly how SCP-173 was insulted could have been said. Writing: 30/40 Some grammar errors in the observation section. TOTAL: 78/100 Grade: C+ Notes: I expected a bit more out of this test. I felt there was some room for improvement and more detail. Dont be afraid to be more creative with your tests. Having 173 snap someones neck is very basic.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ja723HEHitBeN5iKWmbbuznjWinGqA70OMejy0dib9g/edit?usp=sharing
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this was a joke test weiss