Lore: 0/25
Feel free to correct me if I am wrong, but I thoroughly investigated the SCP wiki and found zero evidence it affects its surroundings. All it does is show what a subject wants to be doing at that time. Don't see how it could open keycards in any capacity. While I definitely see CI using this, it'd likely be for vastly different reasons than what was presented here.
Creativity: 10/25
I will give some points for the attempt to try and use an off-site SCP in a unique manner but with the lore not matching up at all I can't really give that much credit here.
Presentation: 10/25
I will give some points to you here for changing up the template but for EOI grading you should be making your own format.
Writing: 15/25
I see a lot of needless capitalization and you don't capitalize your own name at all for some reason. Run your shit through Grammarly next time.
Overall Grade: 35/100
Use your own document format next time if you gonna go for EOI Grading, also next time please do some more research into the SCP you are writing a test log on!