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SCP-194's Glass Containment Chamber is missing a keypad.

Score: 85/100 Grade: A Lore: 16/20 Though the results completely align with what happened in-game, it's okay to twist the story to better follow lore. It would have been interesting to see SCP-513-1 attack, while being completely invisible to its target. Creativity: 20/20 I enjoyed the clever contradiction between SCP-513-1's physical harm, and SCP-714's memetic defense. The usage of the in-game radio was also very creative. Presentation: 19/20 The presentation looks great! It presents an official visual style, and consistently sticks to its gray theme. However, I'd like to see the pictures more organically integrated, rather than it just being placed inside of paragraphs. It was also odd that you wrote "RIG Unit Council was present" as your visual stimuli. Writing: 30/40 This test log has a decent length, but a large portion of it was padded with background research. You can better balance things out by either shortening unneeded information from the Background Research, or adding more detail into your observation. You can always perform multiple similar tests for the same log, to further vary your results. Overall, I see plenty of potential in your work, and I hope you use these criticisms well in your future logs.

The Class's strength isn't the issue. It's the fact that it is so boring to play. You get the choice between a Demoman who throws Nitro Glycerine, a Stealth Operative who can turn invisible, and a regular swat.

+Support Very Cool.

+Support Turning "Asking For Promotions" into an actual professional form is a ballsy move. It might help out people in odd time zones advance as well.

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-Support It complicates playing SCP-106, and may lead to confusion and staff sits.

SCP-131-B "Papers, Please" Gameplay (NO COMMENTARY)

-Support Now wait a minute, did anybody actually watch the evidence? In the first video, it clearly shows that you ambushed Weiss, after going down the elevator. Anybody who cared to look at the video would clearly see Weiss just waiting infront of the elevator with his keys out, a very normal thing to do. Turner said it best here. Why would someone planning to sneak up on you, wait at the face of the elevator? It makes more sense to sit behind the wall. The second video is incredibly unclear, you'd have to be majorly biased to take it as solid proof. Ignoring the fact that the video was so dark that I had to brighten the image, the video clearly shows Orange taking a single shot at Weiss, who had already crossed the bridge. Would it not have occurred to anybody that Weiss didn't notice the CI on the elevated bridge? As I said earlier, it's normal to wait for the elevator with your keys out, and he may have only noticed Orange the moment he shot, which was when Weiss had already crossed. I'm not being biased in the slightest with this response. I'm simply making a rebuttal against a player report that was clearly made with malicious intent. Any normal person would simply remind SMT about the model's bug, not try to get someone high ranking banned for fun. It costs money to replace a model, and if SMT still hasn't done anything about it, there's no incentive to shovel out money, just out of good will. It's not like Bael added the model knowing it was broken, why should real money have to be spent to fix what is clearly a mistake?

+Support With how sluggish tranquilizers currently are, it's both discouraging and frustrating to use them.

+Support /thescpfoundationmultiplepurposesitewidecommunicationlink

+Support Sounds very reasonable.

Score: 88/100 Grade: Quality Lore: 17/20 The concept of SCP-049's lethal touch being negated by it wearing SCP-714 is a bit shaky. Perhaps expanding on this idea further could have made the idea more grounded. Creativity: 18/20 The concept initially is not too creative, as it is one that has been heavily popularised by SCP Containment Breach. However this log has subverted expectations by having SCP-049 wearing SCP-714, instead of a Class-D. Presentation: 17/20 The presentation looks official! But it was off putting when the font changed halfway into the log. I'd personally prefer if the 2nd font was used for the entire log. There was also a lot of empty space, leaving much to be desired. Adding some images can remedy this problem. Writing: 36/40 This test log has a rather impressive length. But the writing feels as if it has a little too much padding. I do understand the decision to add in events such as a CI raid, or that a new Class-D had to be retrieved after the old one got killed in a crossfire, but adding too much unneeded information can make the log feel dragged out. Instead of adding new information that's irrelevant, you could build off essential information, and expand upon details from there. That way, you'd be able to keep an impressive length, while making each section of your log a lot richer. There were also multiple grammar mistakes throughout the log, but it was nothing too detrimental, and I suppose it cannot be helped. Overall, this was a respectable submission to the Weekly Challenge, and I hope you can apply the criticisms given into your next submission.

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