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Research Test Log Grading.
65/100
Firstly, interesting topic! Really envision on what you're currently researching, however I believe we should look deeper into the details.
As of current, the only test was the age, but could it possibly be the facial looks, mental stability of the age and etc? I believe relooking into this test and answering these questions will be an interesting concept so we can dig deeper into our thinking.
I feel like adding more wording and adding a large amount of details would be needed to make this a complete 100/100, as I read this quicker then a Diary Of The Wimpy Kid: Dogs Days book, which has more details and plot into it.
Fix up the fonts, add more wording and some clever vocabulary words, adding more details and more investigation on why 096 can determine the age of the personals thats being tested on and this will be a 100/100! However great test young one!