Jummy
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90/100
Good idea
The whole colour coding is good
Pictures
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+support
why the fuck not
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i don't keep track of that shit
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Grade: 65/100
Efficiency: 20/25
Insight: 15/25
Presentation: 5/25
Writing: 15/25
Test quality: 50%-75%, Meets expectations
Notes: no.
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Grade: 50/100
Lore: 25/25
Creativity: 10/25
Presentation: 5/25
Writing: 10/25
Test Quality: 50%-75%, Meets expectations
Notes: no
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major +support
nu7 has been very underpowered for a long time and has been less and less popular, last thing anyone wants is for another MTF to go.
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Grade: 55/100
Lore: 25/25
Creativity: 5/25
Presentation: 10/25
Writing: 15/25
Test Quality: 50%-75% Meets expectations
Notes: Good job at portraying 682 as the edgy fuck it is.
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Overall:55/100
Lore: 15/25
Creativity: 10/25
Presentation: 15/25
Writing: 15/25
Test Quality: 50%-75% Meets expectations
Notes: I think the tone for this test is slightly comedic, But if this was meant to be taken 100% seriously then.... Eh?
Decent (what i'm also assuming is first) test log.
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90/100
WOW, This is a pretty good log for a JR
Nice and in detail
Pictures are nice
Test idea's a bit bland
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+|- Support. Leaning towards +
Active
Has improved greatly as he said
In both research branches
Still has 9 warns
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On 3/19/2021 at 6:36 PM, Wheatley the moron said:
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Pros Well U ve created new SCP
Cons There are no SCPs starting with 7000 yet. Also Idea of this SCP is quite borringWhy is it bad that they're writing an SCP in an SCP series that hasn't been written yet? There's nothing wrong with creating non-official SCP articles on these forums that don't follow the numbering exactly.
Also please give more constructive criticism than "Well you've created a new SCP" and "this is boring"
thanks
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On 3/15/2021 at 6:07 PM, Jummy said:
+/- Support
Been around for a while
MINGE, I KNOW I'M A MINGE BUT SOMETIMES THIS GUY IS WAY WORSE
Only Semi-Active
2 Strikes
I take this back, You've improved alot.
You're still kind of a minge though. But you've improved.
+support
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crispp
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80/100
Okay, From a personal standpoint, I don't like this format. From an objective one, This looks like a real log a research field agent would make.
You've got a decent test idea going.
The dialogue doesn't feel that stilted and stiff. Still feels a bit weird for a prison convict to use perfect grammar.
Note: eww eyeball stuff */me uncomfortable*
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5/100
Not very clever test idea
You used literal minimum writing in each section. Not that the shortness of it is bad, But seriously put more detail into it man.
The whole HP talk does make sense out of character but if this is meant to sound like it's in character it doesn't work.
I think this should've been an activity log. This isn't good enough.
I commend you for trying. But you can do much better.
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oof, hope you do good in school
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On 3/17/2021 at 7:13 AM, not Jay said:
+Support
Good guy
Good app
Fit for command
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