Brine_2002 Posted April 2, 2022 Share Posted April 2, 2022 (edited) What is your in-game name?: Brine What is your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:530646537 What is your rank on the Naval Roster?: Captain What specialty are you applying for?: Security Director What Naval HC (Commodore+) gave you permission to apply?: Astro / Kallus What can you do to improve the branch you will be responsible for? If I get Security Director, I will Improve SO's Branch to Help out The SO's DT And shock in any way I will also Host More Sims and Training's for Shock and DT So the Battalions Are Engaged I will also Do my Best to Help with the Command in Shock and DT And To Keep up the Activity in SO's. And Answer Some Questions That PPL Need help with or What they Need to Know as an SO DT Or Shock. Why should you be trusted with this position?: Reason I should be trusted for this Position Is I heave Bean In So quite some Time I took the Position on Leading the SO Branch in NavelWhen We did Not Have A Security Director Or Other SSO's To help Lead this Branch I made Shure to Take Action And I'm a Captain in Naval And I did have some Experience Leading in the Past but I'm still Kinda New to Leading a Full Subbranch, but I will Make ShureThat SO's Are Worth Joining for In Naval. Why do you want this rank?: I Want this Rank To Help The Shock And Death troopers More Even in My time with The SO branch I Enjoyed it Even helped me improve my activity inside Naval I even proven I'm capable of leading ppl despite being optimistic but I can Improve my leading skills And Maby help this Branch more. Do you understand that if you receive a strike you will be stripped of this rank?: Yes I Understand when I'm Striked I will Be Removed from this Position and a new Security director will get chosen later on. What is your purpose within your assigned branch?: My Purpose within The SO Branch As an SD, my job is to make sure Shock, DT, and SOs are all performing well and doing what they should be doing. I am to make sure SOs always have something to do regarding their specialties, help keep them organized through weekly assignments/meetings, and handle any issues that may arise between SOs for any reason. I am also there to assist Shock and DT command as needed, as well as make sure the ISD is properly secured at all times. Edited April 4, 2022 by Brine_2002 I'm Provent's to my Previous Applications Former IQ Overseer / EX Havoc 1LT / EX Naval Vice admiral / / EX DT C37 / EX DT L21 / EX DT VCMDR / EX GMVIII / Current Fleet intelligence member \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darby Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 - Support There is little to no effort in this application. I do not believe that you understand the purpose of a Security Director. Answering questions and helping Shock & Deathtroopers are the basics of being an SO, not why you should be trusted with it. You did not explain very well how you will improve all three battalions you are assigned to. I have not seen much out of you in terms of Security recently. Brine, you are a great guy but this application is extremely bad. I thought you would have put more effort into something like this. How disappointing. Good Luck Brine. ~ Darby Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gry Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Bro you waited so long to apply for this job, and made only 1 sentence answers? Also make sure to check grammar as it is important in naval. I am not gonna -support or plus support, but I will go from neutral to support if you improve the application based on the feedback you have received. Chief Aviation Officer & Naval Captain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardinal Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 Please put more effort into this application or it will be denied! You have until Wednesday to revise it! Former: High Admiral | Imperial Navy High Command ISB-021 Agent (Hairline) Kallus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genbu Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 -Supportthis application is one of the shortest I have ever seen Former IF Commanding Officer| Former Nova Commanding Officer| |Former Naval Low Command Member||Admin| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zug Posted April 3, 2022 Share Posted April 3, 2022 3 hours ago, Genbu said: -Supportthis application is one of the shortest I have ever seen Ex. Medical Commander ZugSenior Admin | Forum Diplomat | Support Member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pooders Posted April 4, 2022 Share Posted April 4, 2022 -support as ex SD there is no Effort in this post, you need to put effort and look like you care Please revise this man, I believe if you put effort in you can do it There are wounds that never show on the body that are deeper and more hurtful than anything that bleeds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katsimaru Posted April 5, 2022 Share Posted April 5, 2022 On 4/2/2022 at 11:58 PM, Darby said: - Support There is little to no effort in this application. I do not believe that you understand the purpose of a Security Director. Answering questions and helping Shock & Deathtroopers are the basics of being an SO, not why you should be trusted with it. You did not explain very well how you will improve all three battalions you are assigned to. I have not seen much out of you in terms of Security recently. Brine, you are a great guy but this application is extremely bad. I thought you would have put more effort into something like this. How disappointing. Good Luck Brine. ~ Darby sorry if this is a little harsh but this has all my thoughts best of luck man this isn't personal and one day I think you can be a good SD maybe not now and take time to improve on what you can everyday even if it takes long. Former: Pyke Underboss, Shock VCMDR, RG COL/SHG Lead, Agent Kallus, Lord Kat, Admin, GMIII. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clarence Posted April 6, 2022 Share Posted April 6, 2022 On 4/3/2022 at 1:58 AM, Darby said: - Support There is little to no effort in this application. I do not believe that you understand the purpose of a Security Director. Answering questions and helping Shock & Deathtroopers are the basics of being an SO, not why you should be trusted with it. You did not explain very well how you will improve all three battalions you are assigned to. I have not seen much out of you in terms of Security recently. Brine, you are a great guy but this application is extremely bad. I thought you would have put more effort into something like this. How disappointing. Good Luck Brine. ~ Darby Current: Super Admin Former: Sovereign Protector| | DT NCO|SHGL| Agent Kallus | Senior Moderator Clarence | First "Agent Kyle" Nova CPT | Former Shock LTCOL |Former shock VCMDR| Former Senior Mod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kio Posted April 7, 2022 Share Posted April 7, 2022 On 4/3/2022 at 2:58 AM, Darby said: - Support There is little to no effort in this application. I do not believe that you understand the purpose of a Security Director. Answering questions and helping Shock & Deathtroopers are the basics of being an SO, not why you should be trusted with it. You did not explain very well how you will improve all three battalions you are assigned to. I have not seen much out of you in terms of Security recently. Brine, you are a great guy but this application is extremely bad. I thought you would have put more effort into something like this. How disappointing. Good Luck Brine. ~ Darby RETIRED 30 Second Darth Vader Kio Stepped down General Kio | Retired Dupe Builder for Army/Navy High Command | Last Ever Nova Senior Commander | Retired Assistant Head GameMaster | Admin | ST Vice Commander Revenant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardinal Posted April 9, 2022 Share Posted April 9, 2022 Denied Unfortunately, the Board of Admiralty does not see you fit for the role. You are free to apply when the position is open again! Former: High Admiral | Imperial Navy High Command ISB-021 Agent (Hairline) Kallus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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