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Magnus Rose

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  1. Hello, not going to make this too long. It was a great time that I have spent here, love the community and keep up the great work everyone. Looks like having to go through a law degree and playing Garry's mod is not the best combo in this world, and life have strucked me again. Wishing everyone well. Some names must be mentioned. Tyler: Thank you for all oppertunites you gave me, i can never thank you enough. You have been nice and understanding the whole time i was in research. I hope you get that HCMD spot everyone is expecting from you. Cintal: Great person to talk to, really active, and you shall receive a higher rank in the future (I sense it) Cryptonus: You are a nice person, keep it up Griz: When I received the same rank as you, remembering that you promoted me to AR, I was shocked. that's all, good work with everything that you have done. Avalon: You do great stuff, keep it up. Domz: You resigned, goofer. Stryker: you sound 1Swedish, and you are a nice person showing dedication. Treat RFA well. Blight: Really nice person Rest of the people i don't have in my head TBH, this is only research command. I have made a lot of friends over the way, especially you Site Director Alex, when you gave me stuff as a d-class. That's what inspired me to join the server in the first place. Well, this is it. Might i return? I don't know, I guess we will see. And If I missed someone, don't take it personally, I just mentioned the ones that i had on the top of my head. Goodbye everyone!
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  10. +/- Havent seen you too much around. Will edit when seen more.
  11. Test idea - 23/25 - I liked how you formed the test idea (thinking outside the box) and looks interesting. Grammar - 20/25 - There is some mistakes in the test; the most mistakes I saw is puncturing issues which sometimes leads to longer sentences and unformal text. Which also leads to unclear sentences. ETC. I have and example like this (Resembled 999, but in a bigger, aggressive form) instead of "Resembled" use "Resembling". Presentation/format - 19/25 - Format was little lousy, but i like the general format. But, this kind of test is a serious one. Therefore, there should be a better format, not so scrambly. Quality/length 23/25 - An okay length, nothing to complain about. The quality was alright, really liked how you reformed the text and thought outside the box. The only thing i want to pinpoint is the lore accuracy, nothing more :). Overall 84/100 = Graded a few of your documents, they are getting better and better. Just want you to focus on your spelling. Spelling is a crucial part of research; mis-spelling can lead to confusion and misleading results.
  12. Test idea - 19/25 - Interesting test idea. Grammar - 19/25 - Overall, good spelling. But, I see some issues. It is just like adding "an" in front of some words. There were also some punctuation errors, which you could add, and when you were supposed to say "sight" you said "sigh". But, I don't see much more. Presentation/format - 20/25 - The format was basic. I recommend making your own format so it can be more "original." But it does work. The presentation could be improved by, for example, bringing the texts closer together. Quality/length 16/25 - OK lenght, maybe add some more background history and earlier research. Quality was OK would recommend maybe making some stuff up, as we encourage that. It will make the text stand out more and make the text more "one-of-a-kind." But, continue doing test logs! Overall 74/100 - Alright job!
  13. Test idea - 23/25 - Excellent test idea, this could bring SCP-076-2 to be an ally to the foundation. Grammar - 20/25 - Overall good spelling. But, I see some issues. There is adding the ' in It's and other words. There is some punctuation issues as well, but nothing I would hardly argue on. You have to add The to a few sentences, here is an example - "Second subject" you would have to add "The second subject". Presentation/format - 21/25 - I like the format, it's interesting. The only thing I would recommend fixing is making a black box around the text. That would make it feel more satisfying and easier to read. Quality/length 19/25 - Good length. But, I have some complaints. There are some mistakes in the spelling, and some is sentences are hard to understand. The quality is generally good, but it would maybe decrease the risk of the test. This breach could lead to a massive massacre. Overall 83/100 - Excellent!
  14. Test idea - 22/25 - This test was an experiment to check the intelligence on 682, i believe. As I see it, a good idea to check its whole intellectual and chess is a good way to express this. The test idea could be more well thought out, couldn't really see whole concept. Maybe add some other ways to check its intelligence? Just a pinpoint. Grammar - 22/25 - Really good spelling. Could only see some minor mistakes, for example punctuation. Another example of a mistake is when you added "2d render" instead of "2d rendering", It can cause confusion while reading. Presentation/format - 17/25 - The highlighting behind the text created an unsatisfying feeling when reading, furthermore space out sentences and use a better font. Quality/length 21/25 - The quality and length is generally high. I like how you used the effect of something that did not happen to increase the quality. Overall 82/100
  15. In-Game Name: Magnus. Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:104243907 ULX Rank (Donator Rank/Staff Rank): Moderator, Gold. How long have you been playing on the server?: Around 2 months, cant say 100% sure. Have you read the SCP-RP Event Team Guidelines: I have. How many warns do you have? (Screenshot): 0 Why do you want to join the event team?: I wish to join the event team because of the roleplay opportunity I can show the server. I have a ton of experience with events, I show dedication and I have time to make interesting & fun events that people will enjoy. I know a lot of people already a part of the event team and I would love to help them with events, that way the event could be much more professional and thoroughly done. I feel like I could bring huge activities doing daily events and fun things for the server every day. That could bring the player count upwards and also help the server gain more members. I also enjoy spending time with the community and if I can be apart of the event team I could have much more fun and there would be new ways for me to connect with the rest of the server. Why should you be trusted to be part of the Event Team?: I should be trusted to be a part of the Event Team because I am a friendly person, and I know most people who are on the server. I always show kindness and if people need help I would be one of the first to help them out. As I mentioned earlier I have experience with events, and I have quite a playtime on the server which means. I have game sense with this server and SCPs in general, which helps me help people that need it. I'm really active and know how to handle staff as I am a member of the staff team (Moderator). Are you familiar/experiences with ULX?: I do, I have been a gamemaster and lead gamemaster on a another SCPRP. I have also been staff on multible servers using ULX. Describe an event you could create (Be specific): Event idea: New maintenance workers are hired to clean the facility. But, are they normal? The maintenance workers would have secret gear questioning people about where the different containment cells are. Little did the foundation know that they are undercover GOI which has now gained access to clearance 3 keycards. The maintenance crew would slowly go around the heavy containment zone sabotaging the CCs carefully and they would try their best not to be caught. After beginning with the sabotaging they would send intel to the GOI about the sabotages. Will they be caught red-handed? Will they get away with this? If they are caught they would call in the rest of the GOI to raid the facility, the GOI would have weird anomalies which would kill any foundation personnel on site. This could trigger fun and heavy event.
  16. Test idea - 22/25 Good test idea! Simple and short. Grammar - 20/25 Just minor issues, nothing to complain about. Presentation/format - 10/25 - Could fill out / edit the format to make it look better, let me know if you need help with it. Quality/length - 0/25 - Low quality, i understand its your first document. But, important to fill out the fields requried. Overall 42/100 - Okay job.
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