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FeaR x Green Pikachu

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  1. Grade: 50/100 Meets Expectations Efficiency: 10/25 Can't lie, most questions were interesting to hear but provided nothing useful at all. Insight: 9/25 While we do know that their escorting, we still know very little on why they have level 4/ they escort them/ how their picked out/ other jobs/ ETC. Presentation: 18/25 Phenomenal presentation. Only problem is that some pages have visibly nothing except words, would be cool if there was something small like page numbers,borders, ETC. Writing: 13/25 Very few grammar errors, words show some change every now and then but still arent pleasing to the eyes.
  2. Grade: 55.5/100 Meets Expectations Lore: 12.5/25 I have no idea how to grade this when no lore is involved, so you get the middle to make it fair Creativity: 14/25 Making MTF go feral is a creative way to eliminate them, could also make them attack other foundation, very nice. Presentation: 14/25 All 3 serum logs are amazing, normal test is normal format. Again, like the paper in file, just overall nice but misses the spark! Writing: 15/25 Very little playing with writing, reading it is boring to the eye if it was just for the appearance of words alone, spelling is fine Note: Loved it! Keep it up
  3. Grade: 51/100 Meets Expectations Efficiency: 13/25 Questions could be better, getting information like Checkpoint stations, SCP locations, squads, ETC. However, information is all logged together and straight to the point Insight: 15/25 Basic interrogation, but I love the lore involved! It adds actual roleplay to the log and shows actual character, very enjoyable to read Presentation: 11/25 I'm not gonna lie, didn't realise this was the basic log until after, but, putting it in a file that's written on paper is extremely neat. Writing: 12/25 No noticeable grammar errors. I know its written on a paper and wouldn't make sense, but it lacks color or something extra (Words spelt wrong so they're crossed out and replaced, redacted words ETC.) Notes: I love the way this is laid out a lot, keep it up!
  4. Grade: 58/100 Meets Expectations Lore: 18/25 Not much to cover so not much to grade, 049 falling asleep like that though is a hot topic Creativity: 15/25 I love 049 tranq idea! Wish there was further elaboration though, the substance just came out of nowhere with no description Presentation: 15/25 New presentation epic, its still a bit bland though, nothing special, just looks like a reworked version. I love the camera effects! and the moving as well, very cool. Writing: 10/25 Very few grammar mistakes, however, the colors are extremely bland and its boring for the eyes. Its short, to the point but short. Notes: Good test log, keep it up!
  5. Grade: 44/100 Approaching Expectations Lore: 13/25 Grading lore is amazing! (its impossible) Few problems, mainly behavioral issues, Creativity: 11/25 Not much to say here, I feel like the idea isn't too bad but it lacks the spark that some tests possess Presentation: 8/25 I must say, this grade hurts me so much, I LOVE the idea you were going for. However, the document killed my eyes, half of the document was highlighted in the font color? As well as possessing very few creative features Writing: 12/25 While your grammar was good, the highlighting of the text in black made it a pain in the ass to read, also lacks color Notes: This had serious potential! Just a bit of tinkering would make it work!
  6. Grade: 34/100 Approaching Expectations Lore: 7/25 Majority of the test has problems with 106 and his behavior Creativity: 8/25 I... I don't know what to put here not gonna lie Presentation: 9/25 I like the change of template, but the log feels empty and zooming in is required to read it Writing: 10/25 No visible error mistakes, however, document was extremely short Note: this was an interesting experience to read, still, not bad just think it needs to a bit more fleshed out, Lore is hard to grade due to 106 taking "weed", however for obvious reasons, he wouldn't do that.
  7. Grade: 55/100 Meets Expectations Lore: 7/25 Impossible to grade this efficiently due to the nature of the test, however, some off things in the test have occurred that can't be backed up. Creativity: 15/25 While some things were creative, a majority provided very little reasoning, use or lack of general creativity. That format though. Presentation: 20/25 One, if not the best, format that I've ever seen. Phenomenal detail added, however, a few bit lacks and spice or color and have about 2 colors on them. Other than that, perfect. Writing: 13/25 Very few spelling errors, some sentences continue for a bit, I would love if you made the entire "SCP-682-1" Red to add a bit more color as a lot of the reading is a bit bland Note: From a readers perspective, this was amazing, 10/10. I loved lightly reading it and the test, this grade is also amazing for the field you applied it in. Keep it up
  8. ROA or LOA: ROA Name: Alex Donwood Rank: SET Start Date: 2022/19/11 End Date: 2022/19/12 Reason: Exams, focusing on HCMD
  9. Accepted! Please navigate to "Member-self-roles" channel in the Discord, click on the CI tag (looks like this) and then scroll down to "Requesting FTO" where you should follow the pinned format to get trained. If you have any questions please DM Pikachu#9819 for more information
  10. - support Half of my models would already kill the server without even being that bad, dont want to imagine 9 people using it, probably even more
  11. -Support +Warns old at least +App not bad -Despite you being a previous IMPR HCMD, it doesnt mean much here since it means you know rules there, not here. Not to mention you currently have no RP rank at all Still wish you good luck sir!
  12. +Support Bring back Site 05 where gas room will probably crash the server now ong!
  13. you're still alive wtf, bye starstep!
  14. It does show the 1 minute gap but thats about it, would count as power gaming unless he also used the previous life information to kill you and it wasn't called out, logs don't show that interaction though so still only powergaming
  15. Ngl that sucks, model does have head hitbox but you know
  16. +Support He is currently wielding a 7.62 mm caliber to my head and I am weeping along with my best friend bob
  17. Im not gonna lie you've been pretty clean and i've been checking everything I can to see if you legit did anything bad and nothing came out so good job! until uhh gonna stay neutral since you did improve and you really do want this staff position seeing as this is your 4th application
  18. -Support Sorry to be that guy, but you gotta be medical or engineer to actually be engineer
  19. easy +Support He does quality over quantity in all his events and havent attended a single one that I havent enjoyed, kind of surprised that he isnt SET already
  20. +Support Clearly abusing, should be promoted to super admin as punishment
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