Hey, Jeffern.
Good application, good effort. Just a couple of notes (recommendations) for whenever you may post an application in the future, to help you.
Instead of the words "I feel like" and "I try", perhaps put "I have" and "I do" to show you are doing well. There isn't much more i'd say there is to improve on besides some phrases, so again, good effort.
As for my opinion on whether you should become a Senior Moderator or not, refer below;\
I, Irwin, support Jeffern for a promotion to the rank of Senior Moderator.
I support him because he shows interest in the position, he is dedicated to the job he currently has, and he has been apart of the community for several months, so he has learned much.
Best Regards,
Irwin