Grеg Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/13oNXZI5LYdd9vcbefqVj_-csYHP0_7cWsb9FBsWqJFI/edit?usp=sharing 1 Ranks: Security SM Greg | RRH Guardian Whiskey 11 Security Logo Designer | Premiere Club | #FreeMe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamamo Nugs Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 banger doc, 10/10 this is what we need SR APRF Drappier / Agent Bvvonus EX2 / MA NCS DrappierCI SGT FTO CQOB Bobbithball man (Class D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltable Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 2 hours ago, Grеg said: https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/13oNXZI5LYdd9vcbefqVj_-csYHP0_7cWsb9FBsWqJFI/edit?usp=sharing Great Log, Was alot of fun RPing with you, Thanks. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevlar_ Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 Talent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Levi Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 Well Done Greg, Truly a Amazing Doc. 1 "So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God" ~ Isaiah 41:10Currently: Head Of Research | HOSM Sub-Zero | Ghost OA0 | Emeritus Professor | R.A.U Grand Commissioner Former: Security 1LT | Medical Supervisor | Moderator | Event Team Member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JDWhatever Posted February 20, 2022 Share Posted February 20, 2022 RFA GRADING Grammar: (7/10) The grammar has very few flaws to it. What I would encourage is using more intricate wordings for certain aspects of the document. Design: (10/10) I think you absolutely nailed the presentation on this document. It looked really good, everything was separated accordingly. I really enjoyed this one. Lore: (8/10) For lore implications, I think this is pretty spot on, the only thing I'd like to see more of is better descriptions of the SCP's Creativity: (3/10) Although the test was a creative idea. The delivery of this document falls short on that. The descriptions of everything that happened was incredibly basic, and not descriptive enough. I'd enjoy to see moving forward you taking those creative liberties to write out the log properly. TOTAL: 6.5/10 NOTES: The biggest area's that need work is your creative writing portions. Although making the test log look good, that only the first step. Next is the details of what happened with the test. Some things I would personally add is the hypothesis, and conclusion statements, which should create more questions from your beginning hypothesis! Other than that great work with this presentation! -AGENT GRIZZLY OA1 RESEACH ADMINISTRATOR Billybob | THE RFA GOD | Wanderers Library Award Recipient X2 | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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