Brine_2002 Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 What is your ingame name?: Brine. What is your SteamID: STEAM_0:1:530646537. What is your rank on the Naval Roster?: Lieutenant. What specialty are you applying for?: Security Officer. What Naval HC (Admiral +) gave you permission to apply?: Admiral Proteus. What can you do to improve the branch you will be responsible for? I will Make Shure this Branch on naval is Doing what is meant to do. And all other Batalons are doing their Job. Why should you be trusted with this position?: I Should be trusted on This position Because I was previously on shock before I resigned from it. Why do you want this rank?: I Want this Rank so I can help Shock and DT And I will Also Help enforce the security and law on the ISD. Do you understand that if you receive a strike you will be stripped of this rank?: Yes What is your purpose within your assigned branch?: Help Shock and DT Former IQ Overseer / EX Havoc 1LT / EX Naval Vice admiral / / EX DT C37 / EX DT L21 / EX DT VCMDR / EX GMVIII / Current Fleet intelligence member \ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kio Posted December 13, 2021 Share Posted December 13, 2021 -Support -App is Rushed -Doesn't know the full meaning of being an SO -Needs to learn a little bit more about Shock, and DT -Needs to act a little bit more Professional -Needs to know a little bit more about SO's and how we Operate Good Luck Mr. Brine RETIRED 30 Second Darth Vader Kio Stepped down General Kio | Retired Dupe Builder for Army/Navy High Command | Last Ever Nova Senior Commander | Retired Assistant Head GameMaster | Admin | ST Vice Commander Revenant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psyche Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 3 hours ago, KitChan said: -Support -App is Rushed -Doesn't know the full meaning of being an SO -Needs to learn a little bit more about Shock, and DT -Needs to act a little bit more Professional -Needs to know a little bit more about SO's and how we Operate Good Luck Mr. Brine Current: Outside enjoyerEx: Tenn Graneet/Vice Admiral || Purge BTO CSM Daddy || E-11 SFC MageZX || Security SGT MageZX || GM III || DT HVE 1SG SK3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cardinal Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! Former: High Admiral | Imperial Navy High Command ISB-021 Agent (Hairline) Kallus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genbu Posted December 14, 2021 Share Posted December 14, 2021 1 hour ago, Sad Mario said: -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! Former IF Commanding Officer| Former Nova Commanding Officer| |Former Naval Low Command Member||Admin| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiggieCheez Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 23 hours ago, Sad Mario said: -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! Tank Troopa BiggieCheez!Reserves: DT SB3 Former: Senior Admin | Senior Gamemaster Former: 8th DT SNR CMDR SB3|ISB 021 Agent Kallus| IC COL BiggieCheez|Shock Commander Doofenshmirtz | ARC Trooper ChesterCheetah | Crimson Reaper/Gren/Maroon/Blux2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rakeyyyyy Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 (edited) 4 hours ago, BiggieCheez said: -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! Crewman rakey, Medical rescue squadron, Imperial gamemaster Edited December 15, 2021 by Rakeyyyyy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gideon Hask Shadow Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 2:05 PM, KitChan said: -Support -App is Rushed -Doesn't know the full meaning of being an SO -Needs to learn a little bit more about Shock, and DT -Needs to act a little bit more Professional -Needs to know a little bit more about SO's and how we Operate Good Luck Mr. Brine Current Gideon Hask Resigned DT Command AX4/SC0 [Command member for nearly a year]/Fomer DT SC01/ Retired Rear Admiral/Naval LT/Tenn Graneet/Nova Maj/Havoc Maj/Naval SO/ DT NCO x2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bett Posted December 15, 2021 Share Posted December 15, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 5:05 PM, KitChan said: -Support -App is Rushed -Doesn't know the full meaning of being an SO -Needs to learn a little bit more about Shock, and DT -Needs to act a little bit more Professional -Needs to know a little bit more about SO's and how we Operate Good Luck Mr. Brine Current: Naval Crewman Bett | ST LCPL Bett Former: ST Vice Commander Bett | Shock 2LT Zett Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mann Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 8:38 PM, Sad Mario said: -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! Former: Imperial Lord Darth Vader | DT Senior Commander WH0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M A N D O Posted December 16, 2021 Share Posted December 16, 2021 On 12/13/2021 at 8:38 PM, Sad Mario said: -Support Unfortunately, I see a lot of problems with this application: This application is very, very short. This application doesn't show your motivation and desire to become a security officer. You nailed the basics of what a security officer does, but you need to explain more on what you can do as a security officer. Brine, your effort on this application is below par. The security specialty is one of the most popular ones to choose and it must have people that are willing to dedicate themselves to it. This application just doesn't show it. However, this can change in the future. All in all, good luck! 100% Agree with the Security Director's points. This is one of the shortest, if not THE shortest specialty application I have ever seen. Not sure if you looked at other apps that came before yours for reference, but the application is an opportunity for you to demonstrate how much you want the job. This is especially true of the Security Officer job - which is the most popular specialty in Naval by far. Those that get the position take the time and put in the effort in their apps. This app is far off the mark - no offense to you, Brine. You are a very professional member of our team and I know you can do better than this - because I have seen you do better than this! Good luck. ISB Director Orson KrennicImperial RP JMT | Head Gamemaster | Super Admin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Proteus Posted December 17, 2021 Share Posted December 17, 2021 Denied Naval High Command does not see you as being fit for the position You may reapply after 1 week Current R DT COL PR0 | R Captain Proteus Former Grand Moff Tarkin | [1st Gen] Imperial Senior Commander 2x ISB 021 Agent Kallus | Last Admiral Kallus, Shortest term as Admiral Kallus (4 hours) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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