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Stryker_

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  1. Writing/Grammar: 15/20 I see some small mistakes with grammar and also quite allot of writing mistakes with the usage of punctuation marks, for sure the usage of a comma. (Same thing as the other one) Test Idea/Execution: 14/20 Its interesting idea, just bit lack of details on the research of the sample Format: 17/20 Its nice to see that there has been bit of work put in the format but would nice to add in some pictures. Being this in-game or google. (Same as last one I graded) Length: 17/20 Its a good read for 5 minutes, bit short for an average document but its still a great one to read. (Also same) Lore: 18/20 Usage of more detailed version of 280 and his ability could be nice Extra point: 0/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 78/100 Second log I grade of you, its format and writing are the same really like the first one, so can't give much opinion on it then like the first one. But yeah try to work on it and you will make amazing documents.
  2. Writing/Grammar: 15/20 I see some small mistakes with grammar and also quite allot of writing mistakes with the usage of punctuation marks, for sure the usage of a comma. Test Idea/Execution: 19/20 Quite an interesting Test Idea and decent execution. Format: 17/20 Its nice to see that there has been bit of work put in the format but would nice to add in some pictures. Being this in-game or google. Length: 17/20 Its a good read for 5 minutes, bit short for an average document but its still a great one to read. Lore: 20/20 Nothing to add to lore was good. Extra point: 0/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 88/100 Just improve on some small details and this would be great, keep it up.
  3. + Support I didn't know the server became a grammar cult, damn you all talking negative cause he isn't that good in his grammar bruh. I feel that there is to much emphasize is on applications. Why is it so important that you have to be a god in making applications? It should be how he has done as a staff member, not how tf he writes and wants, most people just bullshit on their apps anyway cause 'word requirement"
  4. - Support - He has to stay in Research, can't escape HCMD at all no time to play other jobs
  5. - Support Please use your brain, how is Gensec able to fight back to D class with the rly one of the best snipers in game and they have no NLR. D class riots would happen way to often and it would also ruin the RP for non combatant branches.
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  10. + Support + Active + Good rp + Great to talk with He may have low ranks but he doesn't act that way, acts respectfull and does his work good.
  11. Writing/Grammar: 20/20 See no mistakes with it, well done. Test Idea/Execution: 19/20 Good test idea Format: 18/20 Good format and great addition with the pictures, do try to make ur own format next times, would be cooler to see your own creativity on it. Length: 17/20 Its a good read for 5 minutes, bit short for an average document but its still a great one to read. Lore: 20/20 Lore was great. Extra point: 1/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 95/100 Was quite nice to read as the format and pictures make it easy to read, just bit short thats it but nontheless good document, keep up the work!
  12. In Game Name: Stryker Steam ID (Ex. STEAM_0:1:91255427) STEAM_0:0:82723908 Discord ID (Ex. Pinbal#5433): NoiseStorm#0001 Squadron you are Applying for (Guardian, Engineer, Analyst): Analyst Current RP Ranks Held: Research: RAM , Nu-7: SM , Medic: Medic and CI: RCT Has anyone recommended you to apply for the RRH program? (If not, it's fine): Avalon If applying for Analyst please link notable test-logs here: How many Warns do you have? (With Screenshot Proof): 2 warns Why do you want to join the Red Right Hand team: Been on this server for over 3 years, so met allot of people and also seen allot change, so in all these years I have always wanted to join something exclusive and special RP branch. Never really went for it as I never considered myself worthy of joining it. So now I finally spent enough time on the server and got allot of experience so I find myself worthy to join RRH. So I finally apply to experience the role-play as an RRH Analyst. I'm also looking to join RRH to even get more experience and upgrade my RP as there are still points lacking I find and RRH could fill that up. Why should we accept you: I'm quite an active person, loyal and always try my best to entertain people to help their RP on the server. I'm also a very dedicated member to research and try my best to make it fun for everyone that joins it and try to make research look good as a command member of it. So I would see myself as a good fit for RRH to help with the branch their roleplay and make Analyst great. So with this I'm hoping to show that I could be a valuable asset for RRH Analyst branch.
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  14. + Support - Decent activity - Does well with test and mass tests - Friendly player
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  16. Due to the person that got assisgned to this test log resigning. We have assigned a new command member to it. Please wait 1-3 days to receive your grading!
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  18. o7 my man, was great being in Research with you, now u joined Domz side (bad) goodluck
  19. Writing/Grammar: 20/20 I see no mistakes, well done. Test Idea/Execution: 18/20 Good interview log, only lacks creativity really as this is just to test the effects of SCP 513, but still well done on the interview. Format: 20/20 Good job on the format, looks good. Length: 20/20 Not to long and also not short, good document. Lore: 20/20 Great lore usage. Extra point: 1/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 99/100 Great test log, I have been grading quite a few of your logs lately, and liked this one the most. You also improved allot on them. Keep up the good work.
  20. Writing/Grammar: 20/20 Well written, good job on it. Test Idea/Execution: 17/20 Good interview just bit basic, but still needs to be done. Format: 19/20 Great format, the only minus point is the lack of pictures, its always nice to see 1-2 pictures atleast. Length: 17/20 Short test document, but thats mainly cause of 343 cutting of the interview short, so could maybe next time do it in 2 parts the interview, so you have a longer document. Lore: 20/20 Good job on the containment procedure and SCP background, I like having people make it more themself then copy it from the SCP Wiki. Extra point: 1/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 94/100 Great test log, fast and easy to read, just needs small work like a picture and make 2 interviews in 1 test log so its a bit longer. Well done on this test log!
  21. Writing / Grammar: 18/20 I see no problems with the writing, the only thing you can improve on is the better usage of punctuations marks Test Idea / Execution:19/20 Interesting test idea. Format: 16/20 Its a decent format other then the lack of pictures which makes test logs so much better. Length: 15/20 Its quite a short test log, you could of added a hypthosis and more detailed test results as thats really short. Lore: 20/20 Lore is correct. Extra point: 0/1 (This is given when I loved reading it. 90+) Total: 88/100 Well done. (No colour cause done on phone)
  22. Writing/Grammar: 19/20 Well written, good job on it, just could use more space between some texts, as it's sometimes hard to focus on the reading as the text size is small. Test Idea/Execution: 20/20 Really unique and interesting idea, well done! Format: 17/20 Bit blank coloring, just basic black, and white. The text could be a bit bigger as I find it sometimes annoying to read. Length: 18/20 A bit too long, it's really well written and all, but has a bit too much filler and could be toned down as 11 pages are quite a lot. Lore: 20/20 Lore was followed correctly as this was different than a normal SCP test log, but you used correct medical terms. Extra point: 1/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 95/100 Really good test, with some small improvements, and this would have received 100/100 for sure, keep up this work!
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