Grade: 50/100
[ Meets Expectations ]
Efficiency: 10/25
While the questions you asked are awesome starting questions, there are so many more questions you can ask someone like a Warden. Things like sub-branches, other Foundation branches, Foundation Special Forces, or, in the case of Wardens, The names of the other Warden branches and their duties are awesome bits of information that can help paint a picture of what Wardens are within Security.
Insight: 15/25
You did get good information like the name, rank, and branch of the hostage, but there is much more you can learn that than. You have 30 minutes alone to interrogate people, so next time go more in-depth with your questions and try to get as much info about everything related to the hostage.
Presentation: 23/25
You followed the log format very well, so good job to you on that. A suggestion I have is that you should put some spacing between the researcher and the hostage's lines so that it is easier to read. Other than that, don't be afraid to branch out, put your own twist on the format like coloring, fonts, etc. You could also make your own format if you'd like.
Writing: 2/25
While you put the main points of information in the log, there's not really any description in the log. Things like the actions of the people in the room, outside sounds like gunfire, or even an indicator to differentiate real and fake info like the warden fidgeting whenever fake info is told. Along with this, there's quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentences lacking periods, sentences that don't make sense, etc.