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6 hours ago, Nydekore said:

Do not assign for grading, if you do I will be stealing your femur.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1V2pVE3PeT1pVsrJRzLEqwfHaGuBgjMSIiS3dkzvPGeg/edit?usp=sharing

im going to grade it and you wont be able to steal my femur 😁

Freedom at last.

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1 hour ago, Weiss said:


For the purposes of ████████.
This document has been assigned for grading.
By order of O5-3

Secure. Contain. Protect. 

The Ethics Committee also feels that the review and grading of this document is important to a deeper understanding of morality and supports this order.

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Test idea - 22/25 - This test was an experiment to check the intelligence on 682, i believe. As I see it, a good idea to check its whole intellectual and chess is a good way to express this. The test idea could be more well thought out, couldn't really see whole concept. Maybe add some other ways to check its intelligence? Just a pinpoint.



Grammar - 22/25 - Really good spelling. Could only see some minor mistakes, for example punctuation. Another example of a mistake is when you added "2d render" instead of "2d rendering", It can cause confusion while reading.



Presentation/format - 17/25 - The highlighting behind the text created an unsatisfying feeling when reading, furthermore space out sentences and use a better font.



Quality/length 21/25 - The quality and length is generally high. I like how you used the effect of something that did not happen to increase the quality.



Overall 82/100 

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