Grub Posted April 15, 2022 Share Posted April 15, 2022 In Game Name: Grub Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:580505572 Squadron you are Applying for (Guardian, Engineer, Analyst): Guardian Current RP Ranks Held: MJ in Maintenance and PVT in E-11 If applying for Guardian preferred O5 to guard: If applying for Analyst please link notable test-logs here: How many Warns do you have? (With Screenshot Proof) 1 that was appealed from a year ago that I made an appeal for https://gyazo.com/ac692ffb90669f41ab45828198fd90dd Why do you want to join the Red Right Hand team: I think with joining the RRH I can Benefit not only the 05 Council but the server since I'm a very Respectful, and Reliable player. I'm almost always on the server when I can be, plus joining RRH would be a good learning experience for me. I see the RRH as the most Presten group of Individuals on the server and envy their abilities so much, ill improve in every aspect of myself to be apart of the RRH. I think with being apart of RRH It would help me make a name for my self and really show the community that I'm a respectful and a good Role-player. Why should we accept you: I think with me being added to the team i can add an extra hand when most of the server is offline since I'm up late pretty often and stay on for long hours at a time performing my Duties. I'm always available and willing to do any Task iv been assigned to with the best of my abilities. I'm a very Reliable Teammate since I'm very accurate Gunman and I have some a lot of experience with being a bodyguard and a protector. I think with you accepting me i could really show you how determined i am to become a good role-player and even a Role-Model to some players on the server. | Former Best Medical HCMD | Ex Lore Senior Guard | Ex Shadow Guard Officer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rinzler Posted April 15, 2022 Share Posted April 15, 2022 - Support I personally believe you should widen your involvement in the server, and build your standing in a variety of branches. I understand and share your willingness to do more and learn more, but experience and playtime should be built before attempting entry to Alpha-1. You are still a junior member in Maintenance and Epsilon-11, you have yet to earn your stripes. I highly encourage you to do that, and revisit this ambition at a later date. Aside from the content of the application, it could be written better. Multiple grammatical errors are present, and much of each paragraph is filler (Explain how you are skilled in these ways, and how you have learned those skills). While this admittedly has not been the most positive message of feedback, I commend you for putting yourself out there. I highly recommend you take my advice to heart and edit your application. Please note that this message does not intend to put you down or discourage you. It is intended to render what I see as necessary feedback for the improvement of your entry chances. Cordially, Rinzler Former A-1, Nu-7, D-5 Professional Lawn Mower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jess1224 Posted April 15, 2022 Share Posted April 15, 2022 -support, for somebody with the rank of MJ and PVT I personally expect more of an application. RRH is not something many people join at a low rank and to do so, it is usually expected that you have an absolutely outstanding application proving your experience, maturity, and that you are ready to receive the role earlier than most others would receive it. In my opinion, this application does not show this, and while you might be a great person on the server, I cannot vouch for this and the application does not prove this. In my opinion, working on this would be your best way to get into RRH. Good luck, anyways! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Operator Houston Posted April 15, 2022 Share Posted April 15, 2022 7 hours ago, Wafflore said: - Support I personally believe you should widen your involvement in the server, and build your standing in a variety of branches. I understand and share your willingness to do more and learn more, but experience and playtime should be built before attempting entry to Alpha-1. You are still a junior member in Maintenance and Epsilon-11, you have yet to earn your stripes. I highly encourage you to do that, and revisit this ambition at a later date. Aside from the content of the application, it could be written better. Multiple grammatical errors are present, and much of each paragraph is filler (Explain how you are skilled in these ways, and how you have learned those skills). While this admittedly has not been the most positive message of feedback, I commend you for putting yourself out there. I highly recommend you take my advice to heart and edit your application. Please note that this message does not intend to put you down or discourage you. It is intended to render what I see as necessary feedback for the improvement of your entry chances. Cordially, Rinzler Current: CI Military Private, Junior Maintenance Former: Nu-7 DHFTO 2LT, Delta-5 WO, Research Supervisor, RRH Analyst Alpha 19, SCP-RP Event Team Member, SCP-RP Senior Moderator Jetstream Sam Enthusiast | Gloveless Individual Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tydrix Weeb Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 On 4/15/2022 at 2:12 AM, Wafflore said: - Support I personally believe you should widen your involvement in the server, and build your standing in a variety of branches. I understand and share your willingness to do more and learn more, but experience and playtime should be built before attempting entry to Alpha-1. You are still a junior member in Maintenance and Epsilon-11, you have yet to earn your stripes. I highly encourage you to do that, and revisit this ambition at a later date. Aside from the content of the application, it could be written better. Multiple grammatical errors are present, and much of each paragraph is filler (Explain how you are skilled in these ways, and how you have learned those skills). While this admittedly has not been the most positive message of feedback, I commend you for putting yourself out there. I highly recommend you take my advice to heart and edit your application. Please note that this message does not intend to put you down or discourage you. It is intended to render what I see as necessary feedback for the improvement of your entry chances. Cordially, Rinzler Current Ranks: N/A Former Ranks: CI SFTO HLS Major D4 Ambrose IV RRH Guardian Romeo 13 SCP-RP Senior Admin RFM EXM CCU CC's: MTF E11 'Last Call' CI Recon Force Frank West MTF Sigma 66 Trooper CI TF2 Heavy Security Elite Sniper The Mets Farmer Jakub Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chineseman Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 On 4/15/2022 at 12:12 AM, Wafflore said: - Support I personally believe you should widen your involvement in the server, and build your standing in a variety of branches. I understand and share your willingness to do more and learn more, but experience and playtime should be built before attempting entry to Alpha-1. You are still a junior member in Maintenance and Epsilon-11, you have yet to earn your stripes. I highly encourage you to do that, and revisit this ambition at a later date. Aside from the content of the application, it could be written better. Multiple grammatical errors are present, and much of each paragraph is filler (Explain how you are skilled in these ways, and how you have learned those skills). While this admittedly has not been the most positive message of feedback, I commend you for putting yourself out there. I highly recommend you take my advice to heart and edit your application. Please note that this message does not intend to put you down or discourage you. It is intended to render what I see as necessary feedback for the improvement of your entry chances. Cordially, Rinzler CURRENT RANKS SCPRP: NoneRetired E-11 COL and EX GENSEC MAJ CHAD WITH GOLDENPAN Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CyClone Posted April 18, 2022 Share Posted April 18, 2022 On 4/15/2022 at 9:21 AM, Jess1224 said: -support, for somebody with the rank of MJ and PVT I personally expect more of an application. RRH is not something many people join at a low rank and to do so, it is usually expected that you have an absolutely outstanding application proving your experience, maturity, and that you are ready to receive the role earlier than most others would receive it. In my opinion, this application does not show this, and while you might be a great person on the server, I cannot vouch for this and the application does not prove this. In my opinion, working on this would be your best way to get into RRH. Good luck, anyways! Retried: CI LTCMDR CI R&D AIN, E11 CPT, and Research Assistant Manager. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GangstaB011 Posted April 25, 2022 Share Posted April 25, 2022 On 4/15/2022 at 2:21 PM, Jess1224 said: -support, for somebody with the rank of MJ and PVT I personally expect more of an application. RRH is not something many people join at a low rank and to do so, it is usually expected that you have an absolutely outstanding application proving your experience, maturity, and that you are ready to receive the role earlier than most others would receive it. In my opinion, this application does not show this, and while you might be a great person on the server, I cannot vouch for this and the application does not prove this. In my opinion, working on this would be your best way to get into RRH. Good luck, anyways! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hoovy Posted May 7, 2022 Share Posted May 7, 2022 DENIED Unfortunately, this application into the Red Right Hand Program has been denied. This can be due to Inactivity, Behavior Issues, or generally being unfit for Alpha-1 at this time. Reapply in 1 week Former SCP:RP Event Team Leader (5/15/19 - 12/31/19) Current SCP:RP Head Administrator "I'll see you on the Dark Side of the Moon" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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