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Writing/Grammar: 18/25 I see no mistakes on grammar, bit better usage on punctuations and try to use a better unique font with slightly more fitting colours. Test Idea/Execution: 22/25 Its a simple but good test idea and was executed well. Length: 19/25 Short test log, but its a decent one. Its a good start just try to add in more details like background of SCP 173 and adding in pictures would help. Lore: 20/25 There wasn't much lore given in this test so can't make much criteria of it, but nice addition on the medical terms and usage, only downside as I said earlier no background of SCP 173. Extra point: 0/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 79/100 Good decent first log, just work on the improvement points and you will make way better test logs.

-=Message_Incoming_From_RFA_Advisors-= Grammar: 24/25 - Well written, barely any mistakes on grammar and writing. Execution: 15/25 - There wasn't really big planning to be planned or done but it was just a standard execution, which leaded to your deaths. Could of tried working more with MTF then solo with another RFA. Format: 19/25 - Its a decent format, bit blank so could use some improvements. Adding pictures and video's was a good idea though. Length: 13/25 - It was a really short document, well mainly cause u died pretty fast. The video's did make it better but I suggest trying to make it longer or put multiple field logs in 1 as this was to short to document it in my eyes. TOTAL: 71/100 It was not bad, try to use multiple field logs in 1 if they are short ones and try to be more creative on execution.

I think you are forgetting that there are so many factors to include this, you need 3 yes freaking 3 D class for some SCP's lets focus this for 682. First of all most of time you won't have access to 3 D class as most of them don't even want to be cuffed or there is none, second by time you have 3 D class you need to get to 682 CC which is a pain in the ass with these shitty hallways and doors you get stuck on 24/7. So if the advert is at 2/4 (think its 20 minutes for 682) you just don't even try anymore if u don't have left D block already. Second: 1 Single D class escaping HCZ can just breach any SCP rly cause SCP's also ignore them anyway (Yes u may blame MTF for that but oh well on low hours its so freaking easy to escape). Third: Maynard and CI the worst even, cause Maynard is legit a minge class for me its only purpose is jus breaching SCP's and be annoying asf. Fourth: SCP 354-4 might have more HP, but is way slower has cooldown on his ability so he is so much more useless in my opinion. 682 can oneshot every class or well close to it and is faster then any MTF job (Even TRT and Raptors)

I'm only against buffing SCPs cause its way to easy to breach them atm. And people that think thats not true are the ones that just want to be breached 24/7 But legit in 1 hour time there is atleast 2 SCP breaches. Mass breaches also happen way to often to. Cause of this I'm against it. - Support

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I wanna + Support this but atm the WO apps are closed as far as I know, well I have been told that by multiple command members. I will give the + Support once its confirmed WO are open.

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Writing/Grammar: 18/20 I see no mistakes on grammar, only thing is could use a unique or more aesthetic font. Test Idea/Execution: 16/20 Its a simple but good test idea and was executed well. Format: 14/20 Its not a bad design, but could improve quite a bit on the design though. Also has a lack of pictures. Length: 15/20 Its a short test, could try to extend it by writing background of the SCP and your hypothesis of the test. Lore: 10/20 There was no background of the SCP, try to add this as its a requirement when making a test document. Extra point: 0/1 I give this point when it was a really good and enjoyable test log (90+ rated). Total score: 73/100 Its a decent first test log, just improve on the points I have given and you will make way better test logs in future. Keep it up

That job is only made for escorting, nobody is supposed to be on it if they are not doing escorts so its mainly gonna be used against freaking D class and occasionally the E4's you meet on the way to the test location. So idk why u would be against the whole update all just for that.

+ SUPPORT - Based asf - Research gonna be big next year, lets go!

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