Wagner Posted April 12, 2021 Share Posted April 12, 2021 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MTXutmog71FVOc1zMKmww2tqRhqXV-Ff7V54pdeyIwg/edit?usp=sharing Please grade!, @GLaDOSsorry for the ping but since you said you would really enjoy being able to read this series figure I give ya heads up that this one is done and ready to read! If yall enjoy this lemme know in the replies and if yall have any questions or ideas please feel free to ask! Edited April 12, 2021 by rawagner || Former Research Assistant Manager || || Former Gensec 1LT || / || Former Gensec PWD || || Former Maintenance Manager || / || Former Containment Specialist Manager || || Former MTF D5 SSGT || / || Former G9 Draugr G5 || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
recon Posted April 12, 2021 Share Posted April 12, 2021 Ah yes: records are [REDACTED] and have been [REDACTED] most likely done by [REDACTED] 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tomato Posted April 14, 2021 Share Posted April 14, 2021 assigned for grading 1 Former DHOR Tomato Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bozobong Posted April 15, 2021 Share Posted April 15, 2021 Grade: 94/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see any problems with the grammar an I think it all looks fantastic. Format: 95/100. I loved the way the document was stylized but I didn't like some of the colors chosen but otherwise I loved it. Creativity: 100/100. This is a great test idea and I think it is unique too from other one's and would love to see more like this. Lore: 100/100 I think this fits the lore great from what we know of SCP-432 and its very interesting to read too. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wagner Posted April 16, 2021 Author Share Posted April 16, 2021 @Bozobongcould you say specifically which colors should be changed? Ty!! || Former Research Assistant Manager || || Former Gensec 1LT || / || Former Gensec PWD || || Former Maintenance Manager || / || Former Containment Specialist Manager || || Former MTF D5 SSGT || / || Former G9 Draugr G5 || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemiTheDuck Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 Good Job Wagner 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wagner Posted April 16, 2021 Author Share Posted April 16, 2021 Ty @DemiTheDuck!, I will be posting the next one in the series today! || Former Research Assistant Manager || || Former Gensec 1LT || / || Former Gensec PWD || || Former Maintenance Manager || / || Former Containment Specialist Manager || || Former MTF D5 SSGT || / || Former G9 Draugr G5 || Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DemiTheDuck Posted April 16, 2021 Share Posted April 16, 2021 Just now, rawagner said: Ty @DemiTheDuck!, I will be posting the next one in the series today! Can not wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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