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Bozobong

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  1. Grade: 94/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see anything wrong with the writing so keep it up. Format: 95/100. Love the way the document is made and hope to see more like this format because it is pleasant to eyes to see. Creativity: 90/100. Pretty good test idea and wanna read more in the future with ideas like this with other SCPs Lore: 90/100. I could see this in some test logs in SCP-432.
  2. Grade: 95/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see anything wrong with the grammar so nice job. Format: 100/100. I love this format and think its just amazing looking so I hope to see more like this. Creativity: 95/100. I like the ideas of interviewing SCPs plus the double with 343 and 710. Lore: 90/100. I can see this being in some lore and can see it being an interview with 343 and also 7101 so I hope to see more like this.
  3. Grade: 85/100. Format: 70/100. I really like the format but maybe some colors to add to them but still it's good. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see anything wrong so very nice job. Creativity: 95/100. Love this idea and I hope to see more like this and read more too. Lore: 80/100. I can see this but it seems like something someone wouldn't really do but I can still see it and like it.
  4. Grade: 75/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see nothing wrong here so nice job. Format: 80/100. I like the format but maybe add some color. Creativity: 80/100. I like this test idea and hope to see more made like this so keep it up. Lore: 40/100. I don't think an AR would know all this information but I do like the idea and can see someone asking SCP-343.
  5. Grade: 57/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see anything wrong so very nice job Format: 10/100. I think you should try a different format as this one isn't that good or appealing to look or read. Creativity: 60/100. Interesting test idea and I like it and hope to see more from you. Lore: 60/100. I can see this as a test idea but the format is not the best and is way too short but please keep it up I would wan to see more.
  6. Grade: 78/100. Grammar: 100/100. I see nothing wrong here so very nice. Format: 50/100. I like the format but its kinda bland . Creativity: 85/100. I think this is great test and it very nicely thought out too. Lore: 80/100. I can see this being in lore and it looks nice and I love the photos to show how the battle was.
  7. Grade: 80/100. Grammar: 100/100. I see nothing wrong here so nice job. Format: 50/50. Kinda short and bland but nothing too bad. Creativity: 90/100. I like this test idea and hope to see more like in the future. Lore: 85/100. I can see this in lore and the test idea.
  8. Grade: 80/100. Grammar: 100/100. I see nothing wrong here nice job. Format: 50/100. It's a little bland but nothing too bad. Creativity: 95/100. I think this is great test idea and I hope to see more. Lore: 75/100. I can see this in lore as well since it could be a way to stop SCP-173 from being able to kill again.
  9. Grade: 52/100. Grammar: 100/100. I didn't see a mistake anywhere so nice job. Format: 20/100. It isn't the best format and it's just bland and really short. Creativity: 50/100. I think this is a good test idea as I can see why you would want to interview SCP-5208. Lore: 40/100. I can see some of this in lore but probably not the joking part but I know that was out of your hands.
  10. Grade: 94/100. Grammar: 100/100. I don't see any problems with the grammar an I think it all looks fantastic. Format: 95/100. I loved the way the document was stylized but I didn't like some of the colors chosen but otherwise I loved it. Creativity: 100/100. This is a great test idea and I think it is unique too from other one's and would love to see more like this. Lore: 100/100 I think this fits the lore great from what we know of SCP-432 and its very interesting to read too.
  11. Grade: 76/100 Grammar: 100/100. I didn't see anything wrong so nice job Format: 75/100. I liked the format and its different from others but pretty bland looking Creativity: 80/100. I liked the idea but who would want to hurt 131 Lore: 80/100. I think this would be good but would not actually happen as no on would want to hurt 131. I hope to see more like this
  12. Grade: 65/100 Grammar: 100/100. I don't see any grammatical errors here. Format: 60/100. Its kind of bland but its not bad either Creativity: 80/100. I like the creativity here and hope to see more of it. Lore: 90/100. It seems like a great lore to 008 and would like it if it was longer.
  13. Grade: 90/100. Grammar: 70/100. I would give higher but I do see a little bit of spelling errors and sometimes forgot to add : when AR REDACTED is talking when to the end plus when talking some of the words aren't capitalized. Format: 100/100. I think this format looks really great and if you do another interview then I would do this again. Creativity: 60/100. I love what is asked but interviews are always done on SCPs but the questions are good and I feel are unique compared to other questions. Lore: 98/100. I think the lore is great and I hope to see more of this kind of lore done.
  14. 30/100 It's an interesting test idea. It's kind of short and reading it made me confused of what was happening in the test also don't send security in to SCPs chambers as that is what D-classes are for. Please include more writing on what happened on future test.
  15. ^^^^^^ Seriously huge support on recon like I think no one can do better than recon as SCM
  16. Name: Dylan Elder Current Rank: Lead Researcher Time in Research: Almost 6 weeks now Why do you believe you should be in Research Command, and what can you bring to the table that others can't? (150 word requirement): I feel like I would be good for command because I am always trying to find a way to help everyone around me that needs some help even if it's all the way from minor to even some major if I can find a way to help. I also will help in making sure everyone is comfortable with new things and I will help with any questions that they have and I will always help with people that can be promoted if I have the power to do so and since I am always on as much as I can be I can also help with people that minge in the morning or late at night and warn or strike them if I can. I will also help people that need help with mass tests if possible and will help people in tests since if I become low command people will also be able to ask more questions that they need answers to as I do love to help people and help solve their problems if there is a way I can. I can maybe be more helpful as a low command since I will be able to do more than a lead researcher and can help people that need research command when there is no one else as I do all my college work a week ahead every Monday or so and can be on this server all day besides sleeping and cooking and cleaning and when doing my college work but if someone says that they need help or every once in a while I look in game and see someone needs help or needs training I will stop what I am doing and help. I feel like I will help and also try to benefit the research branch by making sure that everyone is not having any problem with anyone to not ruin their experience in the server and lose a valuable member of the research branch. What would you do to better Research and increase activity? (100 word requirement): I will try to help with anything I can that I have the power to do so but will also ask other research command if I need to or will wait for one to get on to help with the situation in hand and I will also help people have a better experience since maybe more people will come to me to help them with their problems. I know some people will probably be intimidated by some command members since I know I was and so were a lot of other people I talk to were as well so maybe i can show that we aren’t that intimidating and show that everyone in research can have fun but if I have to I will talk to anyone that needs to be warned or strike if needed to be. I will also try to also make people show research isn’t boring since I know A LOT of people that are new think it is because they have to think of unique test ideas or have to sit while its a code black or red but I wanna help them during those codes by either confirming test ideas that I can grant which I think will make people excited to do them. I can also be there to help with mass test if a lead researcher needs a command to give promotions to people that should be able to receive them since I am always on or someone can DM me if needed to be.
  17. @RookieblueI don't have the video proof as I started to record right after he started to say racist stuff and there weren't any staff or ET there unfortunately
  18. What are you suggesting? - Adding locked doors to training areas How would this change better the server? - It would be able to stop trainees from being able to just minge around and annoy people and sometimes they are able to leave bunks when a person opens a door outside of bunks and they can leave and just b annoying and could ruin the fun of other people are having outside or inside of bunks where they can just get out and roam around and several times I have seen a trainee get to armory but they are shot before able to get any weapons but some probably have and killed a lot of people to ruin their gaming experience for the day plus in the research bunks people can get on the shelves and get out and we should have a roof to prevent this or removing the shelves and putting something else for people to not be able to climb out and minge around or be racist to everyone in or out of bunks. Are there any disadvantages of making this change to the server? If so, explain. - Absolutely not Who would this change mostly benefit? - Anyone that doesn't have a door to stop trainees from leaving. Please link any workshop content, screenshots, or anything that you think may be helpful to those who view this suggestion - Garry's Mod (x64) 2021-03-12 12-14-28_Trim.mp4 Garry's Mod (x64) 2021-03-12 12-14-28_Trim_Trim (2).mp4
  19. You can have researchers spawn them in to give to D-classes for a more RP feeling
  20. I wasn't able to get him saying the racism stuff he said but if it counts at all I do have multiple people hearing him say racist stuff so we do have witnesses that can account for what he said.
  21. Your in game name: Dylan Elder Your Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:447081496 The player's in game name: george of the floyd The player's steam ID (required): STEAM_0:0:162141271 Date and Time This Incident Occurred: 12:25 What did the player do: Minging | Leaving spawn | disrespect | racism | exploiting Evidence (required): Garry's Mod (x64) 2021-03-12 12-14-28_Trim_Trim.mp4 What do you believe should happen to the player: Full ban Any extra information:
  22. Your in game name: Dylan Elder Your Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:447081496 The player's in game name: hoover henry/wooky The player's steam ID (required): STEAM_0:0:154233814 Date and Time This Incident Occurred: 12:30 What did the player do: Minging | Leaving spawn | disrespect | racism Evidence (required): Garry's Mod (x64) 2021-03-12 12-26-13_Trim_Trim.mp4 What do you believe should happen to the player: Full ban Any extra information:
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