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1. Name: Shrimpifyed 2. Current and former RP ranks: Former: RND Senior Inspector (RIP) Current: CI First Lieutenant, Medical Advanced Medic 3. SteamID: STEAM_0:1:460628748 4. DiscordID: Shrimp#4972 5. Timezone: EST 6. What command rank are you applying for? (Low/Sen. CMD): Doctor 7. Why would you like to become a member of Medical Command?: I originally wanted to be command of an RP based branch which I found in CI RND but ever since the CI merge it lost most of that aspect. I picked medical because it shared a good amount of the RP stuff that RND had and I think I could fall into it pretty well. 8. If you could change something about Medical, what would you change?: I probably would not change anything. Medical is already a solid branch as it is and majority of its aspects are already perfect the way they are. But, being CI command, I would most likely add things in the SOP like “CI will shoot you if they see you actively healing/reviving foundation personnel” I have heard of medical personnel complaining about this to CI but they are allowed to so adding this would remove that confusion.

Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25, Obviously this test was on elixirs so it can’t conflict with any SCP lore. Presentation: 18/25, Uses the base template which is expected of newer Agents but perfect scores are only given to original template logs. Creativity: 25/25, I have never graded an elixir test log which makes this completely unique to me and I love it. Grammar: 25/25, No sign of any grammatical or punctuational errors. Final grade: 93/100, A good test log overall but to secure that perfect score I would create my own log template and use that.

Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25 Lore is accurate and does not conflict with the wiki or any other canon SCP 106 entries Presentation: 25/25 Love the way the document was setup not just the test document but the raid debrief as well. Use of visuals definitely helped create a clearer picture of what was going on Creativity: 25/25 This is surprisingly the first 106 log I have graded and the test itself is very unique. The use of the theory that 106 was a soldier fighting in World War 1 completely knocked away any predictions I had about this test. Grammar: 25/25 No signs of any grammatical or punctuational errors here. Final Grade: 100/100 Notes: Great test log! I love the idea of trying to weaponize 106 by inflicting PTSD on him. It gives this test a purpose since it could have potentially helped the Insurgency. Its unfortunate that the test failed though.

Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25. Nothing seems to conflict with the lore of the SCP and follows the wiki well. Creativity: 17/25. I like the idea of doing a off-site test but the test itself was kind of unoriginal for the SCP. It is also unclear how this could benefit the Insurgency. Presentation: 20/25. The document looks nice but lacks some of the features that make logs stand out instead of it just being the before, during, and after tests. Grammar: 20/25. Overall it was good but some sentences felt to long and I had to re-read some of them just to understand them. Final Grade: 82/100 Notes: Overall a good log but lacks some key features that really make logs stand out like the identification sequence before opening the log. I would also suggest try making an original idea for a test so it would surprise the grader instead of replicating a normal test.

Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25 Lore is accurate and doesn't seem to interfere with anything in the 008 wiki. Creativity: 25/25 Test idea is super unique I personally have not seen anything like it. Also use of the Punnett square makes it feel more realistic. Presentation: 25/25 Presented excellently and visuals really helped make the test log more interesting. Also putting a google doc inside a google site was also very cool. Writing: 24/25 No grammatical errors seen here. Very few capitalization errors but overall very good. Final: 99/100 Very very good test log. Would definitely recommend for an EOI grade. Keep on making these amazing test logs man RND respects this kind of stuff.

Post name: “Ghost Unit T2 job update” Name of Job: Elite Ghost Unit Job Model (Model Paths): Staying the same Job Description: These Ghost Units have proven their skills at being master infiltrators and have lots of GU raids under their belt. They now lead the Ghost Units in whatever needs to be done for RND. Job Weapons (Ex. tfa_csgo_mac10): Same as normal Ghost unit but adding tfa_g36 Job Salary: 200 Job HP: 125 Job Armor: 125 Number of slots: 1

Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25 Lore seemed accurate and on point, no further judgement here. Creativity: 15/25 I like how the Agent flew to 173 and brought him back to base but the tests themselves were pretty basic. Presentation: 20/25 The format is original and use of images definitely makes it look better. I also like the identification sequence at the start. Though lacks color which makes it feel bland. Writing: 20/25 Spelling and grammar was fine but there were some punctuation errors. I also felt that some words were repeated to often like "Upon" being used 4 times in one paragraph. Overall Grade: 80/100 B- Notes: I liked how the log didn't take place in one spot and was changed multiple times but I would suggest thinking of more creative tests ideas and ones that could benefit CI.

Normal Grade: Lore: 23/25 Events that happened before and after the test definitely made it more interesting. Also liked how 035 explained the process of putting on the mask, a nice touch. Creativity: 20/25 Test idea was original and creative but it is unclear how it could have benefitted the Chaos Insurgency. Presentation: 25/25 Love the use the google sites as a database for logs and the style of the log makes it truly look like one you would see in a secretive database. Writing: 25/25 Perfect use of punctuations and no spelling errors. Signs of great grammar. Overall Grade: 93/100 A Notes: A very good test log but maybe try thinking of tests that have the ability to benefit the Chaos Insurgency or just explain how it can in the log itself.

https://sites.google.com/view/shrimpbase/scp-test-logs/test-log-1-lake-of-crystals

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pn-D_Zag568rsvZYQZv3vPuRslvLTaS-LKRiYWWx1G4/edit?usp=sharing

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ABQC-9g5u0weqjk0RzOsEbyKk4j6Tqk5N8kzK6w9g0Q/edit?usp=sharing