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Human

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  1. Grade: 64/100 First time i have seen this type of log and i am impressed on it. Lore 17/25 Seems mostly accurate to all the common groups that are used in this Creativity: 21/25 Having A GOI log is the first time i have seen one of these so this gets many point for it. Presentation: 10/25 Very Bland with a simple Dark backround and white fount for most of the text. Writing: 16/25 This looked alright interms of Grammer and in the story it self it does look good
  2. Grade: 67/100 Highest EOI score i have given out Lore: 15/25 Other than the tarp part with him being stuck/not moving I think this looks good on the lore side Creativity: 16/25 Thought the tarp was an odd testing it was really good Presentation: 17/25 Looked really good even without picture of the object Writing: 19/25 Nothing i could see wrong and i do like some discriptions
  3. Grade: 35/100 Efficiency: 10/25 I did like the start that provided with sub branches you had learned Insight: 10/25 Asking about other groups inside the foundation that could/do that they do work closely with is a good way to gain more infomation Presentation: 7/25 It looks alright Writing: 8/25 No real grammer mistacks
  4. Grade: 32/100 seems like a good log. Efficiency: 7/25 Sorta was short and didn't Insight: 6/25 Getting the names of these sub branches could help find them out in the fututre Presentation: 10/25 Look good and i like the use of pictures Writing: 9/25 No grammer mistakes that i could see
  5. Grade: 28/100 Lore: 6/25 It seemed a bit odd how 079 even would work with Creativity: 10/25 Seemed to look a bit more creative with how the things could work Presentation: 5/25 Very dark, Using some visual eveidnce might help spice it up a bit Writing: 7/25 Was short but no real errors that i can see
  6. Grade: 23/100 Efficiency: 5/25 Was someone clear and to the point Insight: 4/25 Might help to gain more info to ask about SF or other command members for any next futur introgations Presentation: 10/25 It looked alright no reallly bright and weird colors so it looked good Writing: 4/25 Seemed fine grammer with some bland writing
  7. Grade: 33/100 it looked good Lore: 10/25 It was fine in a lore sense but nothing that could be a wowing type of operation Creativity: 9/25 it was cool that you brought in an object that is ussaly not on site Presentation: 4/25 It was your own thing but its a bit bland Writing: 10/25 It seemed fine but very short in terms of writing
  8. i could be a bit dimb but i can't get to the introgation it self. the farest i got it says it loaded but i can find a way to find the log it self.
  9. Grade: 71/100 Efficiency: 18/25 Short log but not much said Insight: 16/25 Presentation: 19/25 Normal log format Writing: 18/25 had some writing errors
  10. In Game Name: Human Steam ID (Ex. STEAM_0:1:91255427) STEAM_0:0:608346317 Discord ID (Ex. Pinbal#5433):Human#8820 Squadron you are Applying for (Guardian, Engineer, Analyst): Guardian Current RP Ranks Held:D5 1LT/SIN CI R&D/ G9 GD3 / EOI F1 Has anyone recommended you to apply for the RRH program? (If not, it's fine): No If applying for Analyst please link notable test-logs here:No How many Warns do you have? (With Screenshot Proof): None Why do you want to join the Red Right Hand team: I want to help higher up with tasks. Being a RRH could bring some cool rp not seen it most groups.As a guardian i can move around alot and protect the people I have been entrusted with.I can help show that I am useful to people.I also want to learn more about people and how to get them to their goal faster. Why should we accept you: I believe why my application should be accepted is that I am useful at many different things. From helping people get from point to point to hunting down others that done bad things against the foundation/personal inside the foundation.I have been trusted with many different things from different people.I may not be good at something but joining red right hand might bring me closer to being better.I hope this application goes into consideration and if im not accepted then i am glad you at least looked into my forum.
  11. Grade: 80/100 Efficiency: 20/25 Was long in its pages Insight: 20/25 Asking about sub groups always works Presentation: 19/25 Normal log formate Writing: 21/25 Looked fine
  12. Grade: 89/100 Solid across the board Efficiency: 22/25 Insight: 20/25 Presentation: 25/25 Writing: 22/25
  13. Grade: 86/100 B Lore: 20/25 Other than 682 being docile more it looks good on the lore side Creativity: 23/25 Thi idea of using 682 to make arour is cool Presentation: 20/25 Very green but well made Writing: 23/25 Flowed quite well
  14. Grade: 74/100 Efficiency: 17/25 It was fine Insight: 19/25 it seemed alright Presentation: 19/25 It was a normal log so nothing much to comment about Writing: 19/25 The writing was fine
  15. Grade: 76/100 Efficiency: 20/25 It was good on being clear Insight: 15/25 It was seemed fine but nothing to much to gain Presentation: 18/25 It had a standered log format but it not a bad log Writing: 23/25 It was good with grammer and it flowed
  16. +support Would make a good member
  17. Grade 85/100 Lore 19/25 It looked alright on the lore side Creativity: 22/25 I like the different effects that happened to 682 Presentation: 20/25 Looks sorta like the standard log but still looks good Writing: 24/25 Looked good with grammer and the such but short log
  18. + support A useful member in D5 and is trusted
  19. Grade 89/100 Efficiency 23/25 You were right to the point with the questions and were consise with getting answers. Insight 20/25 With using old info to correct and learn more from the hostage. Presation 21/25 It had nice colurs that didn't constate to much and had very nice presation. Writing 25/25 No grammer mess ups that i could see and the whole thing flowed nicely. Over all grade B+
  20. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uuGO56Oc6rFzLLjJhyOY74G1VE-GIYtjEkhYyMyot7U/edit?usp=sharing Note This was a event person
  21. In Game Name: Human Steam ID (Ex. STEAM_0:1:91255427) STEAM_0:0:608346317 Discord ID (Ex. Pinbal#5433): Human#8820 Squadron you are Applying for (Guardian, Engineer, Analyst): Guardian Current RP Ranks Held: D5 WO/ CI R&D IIN Has anyone recommended you to apply for the RRH program? (If not, it's fine): None If applying for Analyst please link notable test-logs here: How many Warns do you have? (With Screenshot Proof): Why do you want to join the Red Right Hand team: It is a role to help high people though differnt things. It can be some fun RP situations. I like guarding people though things and making sure things go right like in tests. Why should we accept you: I know the layout really well.I also have stopped alot of people/scps getting captured and brought outside the faciltity.I like having rp situations and is good at Rp.I have been useful for many different things like tests/genaral safety.
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