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  1. -INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS- TOTAL GRADE: 78/100 - Length 20/25 - Great length! Pictures weren't used as filler, there were more text than images. Overall really nice Creativity: 20/25 - I don't think I've seen anyone do anything like this but I do feel like some of the stuff you tested would've been already known in lore. Presentation: 17/25 - Font and text size made it kind of hard to follow along. The pictures and overall feel of the document excluding the font were pretty nice. Writing: 19/25 - Really nice writing, not much else to say. -END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-
  2. -INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS- TOTAL GRADE: 68/100 - Overall not terrible but could use some work. Try making a longer document with a long experiment. Try not to use the description, containment procedures, or images as filler. Length 16/25 - Could've been longer, it seems like images and gifs were used as filler. Creativity: 21/25 - Pretty interesting test idea, haven't seen this one before. Presentation: 15/25 - The gifs and videos make it kind of hard to pay attention. There should be a good mix of videos and images compared to text. There were also several graphical bugs such as long white lines taking up almost the entire document. Writing: 16/25 - Really short test, not much to read. The Description and containment procedures were pasted from the wiki but you made sure to change it so you wouldn't get yelled at which is a + -END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-
  3. Hidden away in a small hole under Dr. Alto Clefs desk is a Journal. This Journal contains the day to day happenings within the life of Dr. Alto Clef As you read the notebook you can't help but sweat as you know at any second Clef could walk in and see you touching his personal belongings As you flip through the pages something stands out... You see a piece of paper folded within the notebook, It's a letter or a copy of one at least. "Dear ████, I hope this letter finds you well and that you are surrounded by love and comfort. I just wanted to reach out and check in on you, to let you know that you are never alone. No matter where you are or what you're going through, I am always here for you. I am so sorry that you have found yourself in this situation, and that you have been brought to this place. I wish I could have done more to protect you and keep you safe, but I promise that I will do everything in my power to support you now. I know that this must be a difficult and overwhelming time for you, but I am here for you every step of the way. Despite the challenges and uncertainties that come with trying to reach you, I won't give up. I want you to have a complete understanding of who you are and where you come from, and I promise to share that with you as soon as I can. I understand the risks involved, but I can't bear the thought of not being there for you, so I will face any obstacle that comes my way to keep that promise. Take care and know that you are loved, Love always, Your father." Under the note, in the notebook, is some more text regarding the letter. I had been transferred to a new site, one much more secure and hidden from the world. I knew that it would be difficult to keep in touch with my daughter, but I refused to give up. I spent every waking moment searching for a way to reach her, to let her know that she wasn't alone. I made deals with the guards and staff, bribing them with anything I could get my hands on. I even took on extra tasks and dangerous assignments, just to earn their trust. And finally, after what felt like an eternity, I found a way. I was able to send her a letter, telling her that I was still here for her and that I loved her. But even now, I am at risk of losing everything. The foundation is always watching, always searching for a reason to tighten their grip. I can never let my guard down, or they will take away the one connection I have left to my daughter. I don't care about the danger or the risk, all I want to do is help her. I want to be there for her, to protect her and make sure she knows she is loved. I will never give up on her, no matter what the cost. She is the reason I keep fighting, and I will do everything in my power to be there for her. I'm not even sure if she will ever receive my letters, but I can't give up. I have to try, no matter what. I am her father, and I had made a promise to always be there for her and to keep her safe. And no matter what, I intended to keep that promise, no matter what the cost. ( OOC Note: IC you shouldn't know I have written this letter. This is a story and isn't meant to be found by some random Researcher. The only exception to this is if a Site Admin or 05 would like to add on to this story whether it be them finding my letter, my letter being intercepted by guards before being read by the daughter, etc etc. If you read this story and you're not Site Admin then try to keep all mentions of it OOC since it would make better sense if you didn't know about this letter IC. Any SA+ wanting to add on, please contact me on discord. I would love to make these stories and letters an annual thing)
  4. https://docs.google.com/document/d/17J8LOdM2gq3fuqOPxBqWn2NwPQ9npHaN0P1eByg7yS4/edit?usp=sharing
  5. +support active cool guy has what it takes to be command
  6. Name: Cryptonus Rank: SET Length of LOA (MM/DD-MM/DD): 1/15/23 - 1/31/23 Reason for LOA: I have been busy with Research SCMD duties along with my Sub Branch command duties so I can't put out as many events as I'd like
  7. +support ONLY if they add a custom job just for me
  8. -INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS- TOTAL GRADE: 68/100 - Pretty cool log, could use a few changes here and there but other than that it's alright. Length 15/25 - Pretty short. If this was a doc it would prob be less than a page or maybe just above. Creativity: 16/25 - The test idea isn't 100% yours, it was taken from a youtube clip but It's still creative none the less. Presentation: 18/25 - A few text boxes are cut off making it a bit confusing. The Slides were pretty interesting, I don't think anyone has made a log using slides before. Writing: 19/25 - Hard to follow along. I didn't quite understand how they went from wanting to go to a deep sea trench to wanting to test on 682. -END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-
  9. +Support very famous has funny southern accent yes
  10. Despite never talking to you it seems like you were a real G and many respected you. Sucks to see you go, have a good life outside of GL drama
  11. - Looks very similar to the application I made, just different wording. - This rank is like 3 ranks higher than your current position - I agree with everything Stryker said here. You're a cool guy, you're funny, and a chill person to be around but you do have previous punishments within the branch and you don't have much previous experience and FD is quite a big role.
  12. "-Probably won't make a plot to kill all SA and HCMD and take over the site" No promises :troll:
  13. Accepted. Too lazy to make a nice format. L
  14. In Game Name: Cryptonus Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:46822218 What's your current Rank & Branch: Research Administrator ( Research ) What Type of Command Position are you applying for (Senior Command / Low Command): Senior Command, Foundation Doctor Date of when you first joined your branch: Don't have an exact date, If I had to guess I would say 6/14/2022 Why do you deserve the position? (50+ Words): When I first joined the command team, I did so to help the branch, as it was in need of assistance. I have always been loyal to this branch and wish to continue to assist it. Despite being told by retired members to leave, I have remained, through both the good and bad times. I am known for my loyalty and trustworthiness when it comes to research. I have a burning passion for this branch and have even met some of my best friends here ( Cintal, Stryker, Grizz, Domz, Johnny, Nydekore, and many others) and I hope to make many more friends in the future. Even when I am feeling down, I make an effort to hop on and get something done for the betterment of the branch. What is your main goal of being Research Low / Senior Command (100+ Words): As a senior command member, my main goal is to help HCMD fix some of the many issues within the branch. I am deeply committed to this branch and want to see it succeed. I believe that my skills and experience make me well-suited for a leadership role, and I am eager to put them to use to help improve the branch. Some of the issues that I would like to address include improving communication and collaboration among team members, streamlining processes to increase efficiency, and finding ways to attract and retain top talent. I am confident that with teamwork between SCMD and HCMD, we can make the branch a better place for everyone involved. Do you think there is any issues with the branch and if so how would you fix it: The lack of communication from higher-ups is a significant issue within the branch. While senior command members do not typically make major decisions, it is up to HCMD to improve in this area. I believe that as a Foundation Doctor, my role would be to assist HCMD with planning and help them announce major changes or answer any questions that enlisted members may have. Another problem that I see is a lack of inspiration among members. Many individuals waste their creativity on small activity logs instead of using it to create forum posts that could get them noticed by command. To address this, I suggest having low command members spectate and assist with tests as a way to inspire them to create more than just small activity logs. Finally, another issue that needs to be addressed is command inactivity. Many low command members do not participate enough. Adding more responsibilities such as overseeing enlisted tests, as previously mentioned, could increase their online presence. Why should we accept you into Research Low / Senior Command? (150 word minimum): I believe that I would be a valuable addition to the Foundation Doctor job because I have been a part of this branch for some time now and have many ideas that I would like to introduce to the branch. I have a deep understanding of the branch and its current issues, and I am confident that I can help to improve it. Additionally, I have no current strikes and as far as I can remember, I have never been striked before. I am known for being an awesome person to be around and I hope to bring that positive energy to the whole branch. My goal is to make Research fun again, and I believe that my ideas and enthusiasm will help to achieve that. I am willing to put in the time and effort to make Research better for everyone. I am confident that my skills, experience, and passion for this branch make me a great candidate for the FD Job and I would be honored to be accepted.
  15. -INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS-INCOMING-MESSAGE-FROM-OPERATION-ADVISORS- TOTAL GRADE: 73/100 - Document wasn't bad. Make a few changes on your next document and I can see you being a good Agent. Length 17/25 - Pretty long. Seemed like some info was thrown in just as filler to make the document seem longer but still not bad overall. Creativity: 19/25 - One of the first people I saw to start writing documents on the elixers. This is very creative, I love how you wrote about almost every single detail that occured during your tests and even outside of the tests while walking to the temp CC room. Presentation: 20/25 - The document looked alright but the color choice made it hard to read. I would often get distracted while reading the document, skip lines, and then lose my place. Writing: 17/25 - Few mistakes here and there but nothing terrible. -END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-END-OF-MESSAGE-
  16. +Support Stryker held me at gunpoint and told me to + Support his app. (Kidding, I looked on my own)
  17. Denied Reasons being: Changes were made regarding applications for RFA. Although your application met standards your log was posted and graded before our change was posted. Your application may be made again, however you must use a log made after 12/31/2022. Good luck.
  18. You’re gonna have to find someone else for the week
  19. Name: cryptonus LOA Length: 12/26/22 -> 01/5/22 Discord: Crazygooze#6099 Steam: STEAM_0:1:75973209 Everything else is on rosters. Reason: Visiting family. Won't be at PC at all for a bit.
  20. ROA or LOA: LOA Name: cryptonus Rank: SET Start Date: 12/13/2022 End Date: 12/21/2022 Reason: unable to get on my computer as much as I’d like, exhausted after school, and just getting burnt out.
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