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Posts posted by Tomato
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20Not the most creative test in the world but its still cute
Presentation: 15 /20
Very basic document. However there are alot of details
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
overall: Quality
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20Not the most creative test in the world
Presentation: 18 /20
Very basic document. However lots of details. Well done. There could be some style and images added. Dont be afraid to got he extra mile.
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 93/100
Grade: A
overall: Quality
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20This has been done before multiple times (at least i think it has)
Presentation: 15 /20
Honestly, you might want to add some images or different colors. White text on black doesnt look good
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
overall: Quality
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Very fun and creative
Presentation: 10 /20
Lots of detail and images
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 100/100
Grade: A+
overall: Quality
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10 /20This has been done to death. Sorry
Presentation: 10 /20
Very basic document. Not alot of detail
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B
overall: Standard
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20I only took off points here because, while its well written, 914 has been known to produce / change anomalous qualities for years.
Presentation: 20 /20
Very good presentation. Well done
Writing: 40/40Writing is fine
TOTAL: 95/100
Grade: A
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20I only took off points here because this has been done many times before
Presentation: 20 /20
Very good presentation. Well done
Writing: 40/40Writing is fine
TOTAL: 95/100
Grade: A
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Fun idea
Presentation: 20 /20
I love how you do these documents. Very creative
Writing: 40/40No issues here
TOTAL: 100/100
Grade: A+
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 5 /20This type of test has been done to death
Presentation: 15 /20
Just a basic document. Nothing special here
Writing: 40/40Writing is fine
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B-
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Cute idea. I dont think i have seen this before
Presentation: 15 /20
The color scheme is kinda off putting. You dont need to have all the test be over a solid color background. Other than that it was fine.
Writing: 15/40Kinda short document. There could be more detail here
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
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In Game Name: Tomato
Steam ID: https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198013080348/
Job applying for (Medical - MEDIC + | Red Right Hand - ANY MTF RANK OR GENSEC COMMAND | Research - Researcher+): Research
If applying for Red Right Hand preferred O5 to guard: N/A
How many Strikes do you have: 1 (i think)
Why do you want to join the O5 staff team: I want to join the O5 staff team because I want the opportunity to test on SCP's that are typically above my grade as a Research Assistant manager to test on (such as SCP-106). The respect and honor that go along with the title O5 carries a lot of weight and to be apart of that would be a privilege. I would love to work with my fellow O5 members on research that will better the foundation and society as a whole. Having been in the research department for over a year now, I am comfortable facing any challenge that will come my way. I have faced all forms of minges during my time as a researcher and with each one I try my hardest to act as a middle man and offer the offender the opportunity to better themselves. As a member of the O5 team i will be better equipped to assist with any sort of conflict that comes across on the server. I want the server/research department to thrive and allowing me the distinction of being an O5 staff team member will allow me to better help manage and coach the younger researchers and make research department the best branch it can be.
Why should we accept you: I have been on the server for over a year now, and my track record is exceptional. I strive to be the most mature, respectful, and fair researcher I can be. I conduct my tests in a respectable and professional manor consistent with that of an O5 member. I am active every day on the server and i am always helping younger researchers with their test ideas and pushing them to think outside the box on their test ideas. A creative test is a quality test. Along with being on the server, I am active on the discord and forums daily. I am dedicated to this roll and this dedication will only increase if I am allowed the roll of O5. My test history and test logs are consistently rated highly (two in the Hall of fame currently) and the ability to test on SCP's that are normally blocked off will allow me to produce more quality and creative test logs. I have also published papers regarding various SCP's on site as well as discovering and classifying several new SCP's during my time with the foundation. The amount of SCP classifications, Research papers, and test logs will only improve and become more plentiful if given the opportunity to be a member of the O5 Team.
Thank you and have a wonderful day.
-Tomato
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Cute idea. I dont think i have seen this before
Presentation: 20 /20
More than enough detail for this type of test. well done
Writing: 40/40Few grammar errors. Other than that it was fine. Funny too
TOTAL: 100/100
Grade: A+
Happy 999 noises
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20This test has been done many times before.
Presentation: 20 /20
More than enough detail for this type of test. well done
Writing: 35/40Few grammar errors. Other than that it was fine. Funny too
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Very creative
Presentation: 20 /20
The document is wonderful and full of detail and images. Well done.
Writing: 40/40Just great
TOTAL: 100/100
Grade: A+
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20Not the most creative test in the world, but still it was fine.
Presentation: 15/20
This is your first test so i wont take off too many points for presentation. Just dont be afraid to include more details in later test logs.
Writing: 35/40No issues here. Just a bit short
TOTAL: 85/100
Grade: B
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Very creative. Well done
Presentation: 20/20
No issues here. I love the format of the document
Writing: 30/40Some grammar errors
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10 /20Im pretty sure this has been done multiple times
Presentation: 20/20
No issues here
Writing: 40/40No obvious errors
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A
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173 And Orange
in Foundation Test Logs
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10 /20
Not the most creative test in the world. Of course SCP-173 doesn't like people, it doesn't matter the color
Presentation: 10 /20
Very basic document.
Writing: 40/40
No issues here
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B
overall: Standard