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Posts posted by Tomato
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10 /20Not exactly the most creative test in the world
Presentation: 10/20
This document is really short and lacks any real conclusion.
Writing: 20/40You could have at least tried the test again to get conclusive results.
TOTAL: 60/100
Grade: D
Notes: Do not be upset. Try the test again and come up with quality results
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15 /20This is not the most original test idea.
Presentation: 10/20
Very basic document. Nothing really stands out
Writing: 35/40Minor Grammar errors. Also be sure to write your SCP's as SCP-###.
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B
Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done.
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20Very creative. Well done
Presentation: 10/20
The document was a bit short. You could have added a lot more to the actual test log.
Writing: 30/40Minor Grammar errors. Also some inconsistencies in your SCP naming.
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B-
Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done.
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Cant grade. Access is denied. Please allow access
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I cant grade this because i dont have access to the document. Make it public please
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20I do enjoy a good cross test. Full points there.
Presentation: 10/20
The document was a bit short. You could have added alot more to the actual test log.
Writing: 35/40Minor Grammar errors.
TOTAL: 85/100
Grade: B
Notes: I enjoy a quality cross test. Well done.
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20I really enjoyed the concept behind this test. It's gross what happened but it's also funny.
Presentation: 15/20
Make sure to bold the different sections of your test, otherwise it all just kinda runs together into a long sentance.
Writing: 35/40I only took off points here because the document is a bit short and there are very minor grammar errors.
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A-
Notes: Very creative
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Lore Name: tomato
Steam ID: PotatoPie (dont know my steam id)
Rank: Research Supervisor
Activity Level: 10/10 -
Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 20 /20I really enjoyed the concept behind this test. It's silly but thats what makes it fun
Presentation: 20/20
I couldnt open the document but if its anything like your other test im sure it was fine
Writing: 35/40I only took off points here because the document is a bit short
TOTAL: 95/100
Grade: A
Notes: Very creative. I enjoyed
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15/20This test has been done before
Presentation: 20/20I can tell you put alot of effort into this document. Well done
Writing: 30/40I took points off here because the document is rather short. there could be alot more in the observation section.
TOTAL: 85/100
Grade: D-
Notes: The style of the document is nice. Keep up the good work
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10/20This isnt very creative. This test has been done before
Presentation: 10/20It's a basic document. There isnt much too it.
Writing: 30/40Rather short document. There could be alot more written here.
TOTAL: 70/100
Grade: C-
Notes:Do not be upset by the grade. Instead learn from it and come back with an even better test. I think more can be done with this test. Come back and try it again.
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10/20This isnt very creative. Of course armor would help protect against a bullet
Presentation: 10/20Its a short document.
Writing: 20/40Some grammar errors in the observation section. There could have been more in the observation section.
TOTAL: 60/100
Grade: D-
Notes:Do not be upset by the grade. Instead learn from it and come back with an even better test. I think more can be done with this test. Come back and try it again.
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 15/20Pretty sure this has been done before, however i cant remember where i have seen it.
Presentation: 5/20Pretty basic presentation. Nothing special. Also, you lost points because the observation section is so short. you could have had alot more.
Writing: 35/40Some grammar errors
TOTAL: 75/100
Grade: C
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Lore: 20 /20
This follows the lore pretty well
Creativity: 20 /20I dont remember seeing this type of test before. So you get points for that
Presentation: 20/20
Presentation is fine. Lots of detail. I appreciate you including so much detail.
Writing: 40/40
No obvious spelling or grammar errors
TOTAL: 100/100
Grade: A+
Notes: Keep up the good work. I see great things in your future.
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Lore: 20 /20
This follows the lore pretty well
Creativity: 15/20This test has been done plenty of times before. that is the sole reason for point loss.
Presentation: 20/20
I love any test that has a video accompanying it. It just shows you went the extra mile for your tests.
Writing: 40/40
No obvious spelling or grammar errors
TOTAL: 95/100
Grade: A
Notes: Love the video. Keep up the good work
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Lore: 20 /20
This follows the lore pretty well
Creativity: 15/20Not the most original test idea in the world.
Presentation: 10/20There could be a lot more detail in this. There isnt really any detail in what SCP-173 did to the class D
Writing: 35/40No obvious spelling or grammar errors. I took points off for the short length.
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B-
Notes: You mainly lost points for the lack of detail. Don't be afraid to add more detail to your test logs.
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Lore: 20 /20
This follows the lore pretty well
Creativity: 18/20I took two points off because i am pretty sure this test has been done many times before. However, i am a fan of 173 cross tests so i added back a few points.
Presentation: 20/20Going the extra mile to do a video warrants extra points in my book. Well done.
Writing: 40/40No obvious spelling or grammar errors
TOTAL: 98/100
Grade: A+
Notes: Well done. I love the video portion
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Lore: 20 /20
This follows the lore pretty well
Creativity: 15/20While not the most creative test, the idea of studying the subject after getting the stone disease is neat.
Presentation: 10/20There could be a lot more detail in this. Having just one sentence for your observation is a bit too small of an amount.
Writing: 40/40No obvious spelling or grammar errors
TOTAL: 85/100
Grade: B
Notes: You mainly lost points for the lack of detail. Don't be afraid to add more detail to your test logs.
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Lore: 20 /20
I'm not sure this follows the lore. SCP-008 has a 100% infection rate so for the class D to not experience symptoms right away is bizarre.
Creativity: 10/20Not the most creative test. Pulling out items from 1162 is the basis of every test. Dont be afraid to think outside the box on your tests.
Presentation: 20/20I like the time log style for what happened. Over all very well designed.
Writing: 40/40No obvious spelling or grammar errors
TOTAL: 90/100
Grade: A-
Notes: Not bad for your first test. Dont be afraid to be a bit more creative with your tests. Overall well done
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Lore: 15/20
I'm not sure this follows the lore. SCP-008 has a 100% infection rate so for the class D to not experience symptoms right away is bizarre.
Creativity: 20/20I like the idea of doing essentially three tests at once. I also like the idea of studying prolonged exposure. Well done there.
Presentation: 15/20I feel as though the document kinda cuts off in the observation section. I felt as though there was more to be said about what happened. I could be wrong but a little more detail wouldn't go amiss. That being said the document follows the proper presentation procedures.
Writing: 30/40Some grammar errors. No obvious spelling errors. Make sure to capitalize at the beginning of your sentences.
TOTAL: 80/100
Grade: B-
Notes: Try redoing this test and see what else you can find. I am interested to see what other results you can gather.
-Tomato
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 10/20Not the most creative test. We knew SCP-173 would kill the class D. I dont think the insult really changed that fact.
Presentation: 18/20Its a short document.Granted there isn't much to be said but a little more detail never hurt. Exactly how SCP-173 was insulted could have been said.
Writing: 30/40Some grammar errors in the observation section.
TOTAL: 78/100
Grade: C+
Notes: I expected a bit more out of this test. I felt there was some room for improvement and more detail. Dont be afraid to be more creative with your tests. Having 173 snap someones neck is very basic.
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this was a joke test weiss
SCP-999 Smothering Test
in Foundation Test Logs
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Lore: 20/20
Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.
Creativity: 5 /20
This test has been done to death
Presentation: 10/20
This document is really short and lacks any real detail
Writing: 30/40
No obvious errors, just lack of detail
TOTAL: 65/100
Grade: D
Notes: Do not be upset. Try to come up with more detail's next time