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Kevin Parker

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  1. Grade: 100

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 2019's Lore, an the things you add are completely good and doesn't affect to his lore.

    Creativity:  20/20

    I like how you test on what he can do and if he has a limit, we don't know so much about 2019 but this can be helpful.

    Presentation: 20/20

    I would like to see pictures and more color, but there are no currently pictures of 2019, but after all well done.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  2. Grade: 82

    Lore: 17/20

    You followed the 096's Lore. The thing you add is kinda weird, if you looked at 096 you are dead, how night vision temporarily avoid this? (You could add this).  

    Creativity: 15/20

    It is not a bad idea, just need to put more effort into the analysis and conclusion (you need to add more info here). This has potential but you can keep researching on this.

    Presentation: 10/20

    Simple. I recommend you to use color and put some pictures (Photos or Draws), check the hall of fame in Discord.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Written.

     

    FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.

  3. Grade: 70

    Lore: 5/20

    1048 is not a bomb, in the case that you're talking about the bear made of ears that will be 1048-A; also 1048 is not able to talk is a teddy bear. read his lore on the official wiki.

    Creativity: 15/20

    the idea was good, but the thing about the bomb 

    Presentation: 10/20

    is a simple report. I recommend you to add color to the text, to divide the paragraphs and make it easy to read, also put some pictures (Photos or Draws) to make it striking and understandable. I recommend you to check the hall of fame in Discord to give you an idea of how to make a report.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME, THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

    Keep Researching you can make it better :3

  4. Grade: 90

    Lore: 10/20

    Some problems when following the special protocols to do an interview with 035, Remember to always have a Psychologist with you. I didn't see if 035 was in a D-class body or doll or something. some little details that you missed in the Interview, but after all is good.

    Creativity: 20/20

    I enjoyed it, it's interesting.

    Presentation: 20/20

    Good Presentation for this test, I liked it, so original.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  5. Grade: 98

    Lore: 20/20

    This followed the 996's and 3060's lore.

    Creativity: 20/20

    This is so interesting, I enjoyed it. nice test.

    Presentation: 18/20

    I like the color in differents paragraphs it helps to read it easily, but I will like to see a picture in this test to make it more dynamic.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

     

     

  6. Grade: 95

    Lore: 17/20

    You followed the 457's Lore, but the submissive way in which he acted is weird, you can add something to know how to calm down 457.

    Creativity: 20/20

    Nice questions, this will add more data to his Info Report.

    Presentation: 18/20

    A fancy presentation. I will like to add more color, but good enough.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted. 

    FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  7. Grade: 88

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 999's lore.

    Creativity: 15/20

    The question is really good. the thing is, the way you develop the test. you can add more to this test report, but this is fine. good job.

    Presentation: 15/20

    It is a simple presentation. I recommend you to add color and pictures (Photos or Draws) to add more dynamic and make the report more striking. check the hall of fame in discord to give you an idea.

    Writing: 38/40

    Some minor grammatical errors.

     

    FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.

  8. Grade: 85

    Lore: 15/20

    This about the heart and things are not part of the lore. I need background info for these things.

    Creativity: 15/20

    interesting question, but I think that the part of the heart and the gas is far from the lore. 

    Presentation: 15/20

    good presentation, it can be better, but good enough ;3.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.

  9. Grade: 70

    Lore: 20/20

    You kinda followed the 066's Lore.

    Creativity: 5/20

    I need more background info and the purpose of this test.

    Presentation: 5/20

    This is not complete.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well redacted.

     

    FOR ME, THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

  10. Grade: 85

    Lore: 20/20

    You Followed the 912's Lore.

    Creativity: 10/20

    It is something new, but not so useful. I don't know if this is an Efficiency, labor or Knowledge (I will take it as Knowledge) but remember to put that in the title.

    Presentation: 15/20

    is a Simple presentation. You can add some pictures (Photos or Draws) To make it more striking and add some color to make it easy to read.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

     

    FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.

  11. Grade: 80

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 999's lore.

    Creativity: 15/20

    Is nothing new, but it can be an addendum.

    Presentation: 10/20

    Is a simple presentation. I recommend to use colors and pictures (Photos or Draws), check the hall of fame in Discord to give an idea.

    Writing:35/40

    Some grammatical errors, but understandable.

    FOR ME THIS IS A  STANDARD TEST.

  12. Grade: 75

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 912's lore.

    Creativity: 15/20

    Interesting Questions, you can try to get information using another method.

    Presentation: 10/20

    The presentation is Simple. I recommend you to use color and pictures (Photos or Draws) this will add dynamic and make striking your report. Check Hall of fame in Discord to give you an idea.

    Writing: 30/40

    Some  grammatical errors, but understandable.

     

    FOR ME THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

  13. Grade: 75

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 1048's Lore.

    Creativity: 5/20

    Is not the first time that someone do this test.

    Presentation: 10/20

    Simple Presentation. I recommend you to use Color and Pictures (Photos or Draws) to make more striking and dynamic your report. Check the hall of fame in Discord to give you an idea. 

    Writing: 30/40

    Some grammatical errors, but understandable.

    FOR ME THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

  14. Grade: 90

    Lore: 15/20

    You followed the 049's Lore. The interview was good, it ends fast, to my liking this is a good interview it can be better but is good enough.

    Creativity: 15/10

    Is not the first time that a Researcher talks about what the pestilence is, I like the theory but I think is not so accurate, I need to see more background.

    Presentation: 20/20

    A fancy presentation I liked it.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well redacted.

    FOR ME THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  15. Grade: 75

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the 999's lore.

    Creativity: 10/20

    This is nothing new, many JR have done this test, but is not a bad Question for a test.

    Presentation: 10/20

    This is a Simple format. I recommend you to use color and pictures (Photos or Draws) this will make more readable and striking. Check the hall of fame in Discord to give you an idea of how to do a great presentation 

    Writing: 35/40

    Some grammatical errors, but understandable.

     

    FOR ME THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

  16. Grade: 95

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the lore and you add something new but not so far from the original lore.

    Creativity: 20/20

    It's interesting and striking too, this help us in the research of the real power of 035.

    Presentation: 15/20

    All the paragraphs in the same color are not so fancy, but I liked the way you put the link documents.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  17. Grade: 65

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the lore of 999.

    Creativity: 15/20

    It is your first test on this Branch. it's not a bad question but you can add more to this, on what you can use it? or if this is a problem for a human?

    Presentation: 5/10

    It's a Simple test format. I recommend you to add, color and pictures (PHOTOS OR DRAWS) this will make more readable your test and striking. I recommend you to check the Hall of Fame in Discord to give you an idea of how to do a good format.

    Writing: 25/40

    Some grammar problems.

    FOR ME THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST

  18. Grade: 90

    Lore: -/20

    I can't put a grade on this point, cause it's a new SCP written by you.

    Creativity: 10/20

    I can put this SCP on the J group, also I would like to say you to add the G on the name (SCP-6299-J-G), for Gaminglight. This is kinda weird. It would be nice as SCP, has potential.

    Presentation: 20/20

    Really good, you followed the format of a SCP Info.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

     

    FOR ME THIS A QUALITY REPORT.

  19. Grade: 90

    Lore: 10/20

    "yo wtf" That was what I said when I read that 999 died. It's weird to see this conduct on 999,  999 can't die; so next time try to control him with candies.

    Creativity: 20/20

    I enjoy reading this and the final picture of 999 was funny.

    Presentation: 20/20

    I like how the report is, clear and simple.

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Redacted.

    FOR ME THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  20. Grade: 95

    Lore: --/20

    I can't put a grade on this point, cause it's a new SCP written by you. 

    Creativity: 20/20

    I liked the SCP Lore, I have never seen before so it's something new and other researchers can test on this SCP.

    Presentation: 18/20

    Really good, you followed the format of a SCP Info, I see some mistakes with photos, but nothing bad.

    Writing: 37/40

    small grammatical problems, but readable.

     

    FOR ME THIS IS A QUALITY REPORT.

  21. Grade: 90

    Lore: 20/20

    you followed part of the lore, I see that you research about exoskelotons. you did a great job.

    Creativity: 15/20

    this is a good test, but i don see it so useful. you could do something with the exoskelotons or make a shield with it.

    Presentation: 15/20

    I liked the Report. You didn't follow the format that's not good >:c, but in fact, you did a great job adding little things like the cover page. I would put more color in the text.

    Writing: 40/40

    well redacted.

    FOR MY THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.

  22. Grade: 65

    Lore: 20/20

    You followed the lore.

    Creativity: 5/20

    this is not useful, you can add something to your question. Try to make something useful you can test on 999 to make something to help humanity or research.

    Presentation: 10/20

    The Simple. You skipped the "Errors and/or safety hazards", this is where you put the Errors that could happen during the test. As JR I know that you followed the format but you can add some color and some pictures this will add more dynamic.

    Writing: 30/40

    Some grammar mistakes, but readable.

    For me this is a SUB-STANDARD test.

  23. Grade: 70

    Lore: 10/20

    Is not how 1162 exactly works, but yeah it's what they desired in their lifes. So you are not completely far to the lore.

    Creativity: 10/20

    Is something that we already knew, but you can research on how we can use this to help in a branch? You can add the answers in the conclusion.

    Presentation: 10/20

    I know that this is your first report, is not so bad but is like JR's General reports. I Recommend you to use color and pictures (photos or draws) in the report, it will make easy to read and striking your report. 

     

    Writing: 40/40

    Well Written.

    FOR ME THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.

    This is your first test report, I belive that you will make great things here. Keep researching and listen to the advices. I see that you like researching in this SCP, Keep the work on it and Memorize the lore ;3.

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