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Kevin Parker

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  1. This is an Informative Log about 682 and his features (Recommended if you're gonna interview him). https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JC6FCbOjRVFOGgN4NJ4WIkKO6a5eoFyC2b_hzVZsPFg/edit?usp=sharing
  2. Lore Name: Kev P Rank: Lead Researcher Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:81933551 Activity Level: 5
  3. Grade: 95 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 1025's Lore. Creativity: 15/20 This test is just a recopilation about Regenerative Cancer, it will help for future test for other Researchers. Presentation: 20/20 Formal and follows the format. I liked the presentation of this test, clean and striking. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted, enjoyable and informative. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  4. Kev P. Research Manager. SCP-1162. Termination. Document: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1Uy5M5C1tmVC9K7JHoacUf_D-eMgd-la3dHfSmaQWFs4
  5. Grade: 87 Lore: 17/20 You followed the Lores, I doubt 096 stops a chasing if the victim becomes a 049-2, but it would be. Creativity: 20/20 I Liked the Question and the Observation part, really interesting and it's a striking question. Presentation: 10/20 You didn't follow the format. I personally don't like this format for a document, I'll recommend you to change it. no more white in lines, but the rest it's pretty good. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted, Easy to read. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
  6. Grade: 90 Lore: 15/20 You followed the 1162's lore, the thing that the hole give something to a newborn it's something new. Creativity: 20/20 A NEWBORN?. man, that's so Fucked up, but leaving that this is a good test, I liked but I was nervous about this baby. This is something new and pretty good. Presentation: 18/20 You followed the format. I would like to see some pictures to illustrate and complement the observation part, adding color to some words will make this test amazing and easy to read. I liked the presentation of this Document. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted, an enjoyable read. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  7. Grade: 97 Lore: 20/20 You followed 173's Lore. The things you added can be in the lore, so nothing far from it. Creativity: 20/20 Studying the feces and blood of 173 is something new, this can be used for future tests on 173 and I liked the observation part. Presentation: 18/20 You followed the format. I would like to see some pictures to illustrate and complement the observation part, adding color to some words will make this test amazing and easy to read. I liked the presentation of this Document. Writing: 39/40 Well Redacted, some minor mistakes. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  8. Grade: 89 Lore: 18/20 Something like 173 has emotions (anger and joy) that's new but it's nothing related to his lore and well you followed the 999's lore. Creativity: 16/20 interesting and short. I think this is a good test nothing bad with it but is not perfect. Presentation: 15/20 You followed the format, but those white lines are so irritating, I suggest to change that and add color instead also you can add pictures or draws to complement the "Observation" point. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
  9. Grade: 100 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 173's and 912's lore, Nothing far from their lore. Creativity: 20/20 This is new 173 vs 912, I liked how 912 tried his best for arrest 173. Presentation: 20/20 This presentation is pretty good, it can be better but it's good. You followed the format and yeah it will be better to have pictures of the fight. Writing: 40/40 Some little thins ( , . :), but nothing to worry about. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST
  10. Grade: 88 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 066's lore, and what you add is not so far from its lore (it could be). Creativity: 20/20 I liked the idea and the observation part. Presentation: 18/20 You followed the format, but in the "Background info", you gotta put where are you basing your question. I recommend you to use color on the text and add pictures. Writing: 30/40 Some Grammatical errors, but readable. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
  11. Grade: 95 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 173's lore. Creativity: 15/20 This is nothing new, but I liked the way you told it. Presentation: 20/20 This is a Fantastic Doc, I loved it. It's beautiful and striking. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted, enjoyable. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  12. Grade: 85 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 049's lore (Change the title, this is 049 not 047). Creativity: 15/20 It's not new that 049 works on his "Cure" and take his time to study for the development of a new cure, this is interesting and good to read. Presentation: 10/20 It's a great document, but you didn't follow the Format for test logs check the JR Guide (https://docs.google.com/document/d/18FIT_224DCvc1iDc5Ao__r_y7whJyFIfHGPpSvKlnME/edit) so you can check how to do it next time. I recommend you to add some Pictures or draws that will be helpful to express something and will be striking. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted, easy to read. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
  13. Grade: 60 Lore: 10/20 This is weird, This new thing about injecting 999 liquid is weird. Creativity: 10/20 interesting idea but not well done. Presentation: 10/20 You followed the format but there is not too much info, no color or pictures. Writing: 30/40 Well Written, but no so much to read. FOR ME, THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD TEST.
  14. Grade: 85 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 513's lore, not too many tests on this SCP and this is interesting. Creativity: 15/20 I like the idea and the hypothesis, but the way you wrote all was not good enough. Presentation: 10/20 this is not the accurate format for the test, I recommend you to check the JR Guide (https://docs.google.com/document/d/18FIT_224DCvc1iDc5Ao__r_y7whJyFIfHGPpSvKlnME/edit) so you can have an idea of how to write it. Writing: 40/40 No grammatical errors, but need to practice the way to explain the things, it's kinda dizzy. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
  15. Grade: 100 Lore: 20/20 You followed 096's lore, and I see that you used some facts from other terminations. Creativity: 20/20 using a giant hydraulic press for the termination is something new. I see that putting 096 in acid for 30 min (at this point he will be only boned) so you only needed to put the bones in the hydraulic press before he regenerated, but after that is a pretty good idea and test. Presentation: 20/20 I liked the presentation, simple but striking, easy to read and enjoyable. Writing: 40/40 Excellent redact, i like the way that is written. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  16. Grade: 100 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 939's lore. Creativity: 20/20 I liked the Question and how this test goes. Presentation: 20/20 Normal Presentation, but easy to read, is not so much text and I'll put the picture in the Observation point. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  17. Grade: 60 (D) Lore: 20/20 This Test log shows how 912 is, you followed his lore without a problem. Creativity: 5/20 The thing here is that this test is not complete (not to say null), you copy-paste the paragraphs from his wiki page on the background information. The Background info needs to be related to your test, show info that complements your question and hypothesis. Presentation: 5/20 This is the basic presentation. I would give you 15 points, but there is no info in this report, the Quote needs to be in the analysis and conclusion, that's how you have to do it. Writing: 30/40 Some Grammatical errors in the Quote, some words are not well written. FOR ME, THIS IS A SUB-STANDARD REPORT. QUOTE: I Trust that you will be better, so keep researching in SCPs, you are a JR so don't worry if you do some mistakes. We are here to help you.
  18. Lore Name: Kev P. Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:81933551 Rank: Research Manager. Activity Level: Active.
  19. Grade: 100 Lore: 20/20 Really good presentation of 079, we don't get something new about him in this interview, but it's interesting. Creativity: 20/20 This doesn't bring something new about 079 but it's enjoyable and interesting I liked the video and it helps a lot. Presentation: 20/20 I liked the presentation, fancy and short. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  20. Grade: 100 Lore: 20/20 You followed a chain of discoveries and you didn't invented nothing far from what you see. Creativity: 20/20 I clap the way you discover all with only watching the cup using the color and what it does when you drink it. Presentation: 20/20 A fancy presentation, well done. Well Format. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted. Good use of words. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  21. Grade: 98 Lore: 20/20 You followed the 035's lore. Really good about the bullets and the process you do to obtain them. Creativity: 20/20 Really good the weapon although the bullets are big, it's really interesting this idea and it's good for development. Presentation: 18/20 Some problems with the order of the logo and text, but well illustrated and good format. Writing: 40/40 Well redacted. FOR ME, THIS IS A QUALITY TEST.
  22. Grade: 85 Lore: 10/20 This is not 457, 457 talks so primitive. is a flame that needs to consume fuel if don't he will disappear, his intelligence depends on his high, so i don't know if you gave him a lot of fuel to talk to him in that way, obviously if he gets a lot of fuel is super dangerous so, need more detail there. Creativity: 15/20 It's not a bad interview, really enjoyable and interesting. Presentation: 20/20 Fancy Presentation, well done. Writing: 40/40 Well Redacted. FOR ME, THIS IS A STANDARD TEST.
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