Warmug Posted April 12, 2023 Share Posted April 12, 2023 Requesting Normal Grading Second test log. Note that the "stolen document" isn't stolen, I was the one who wrote it. I hope you enjoy the read https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kso4TCT67sAzLhSJj4kqia9-CNoW-xPeR31KKIpcmcg/edit?usp=sharing Retired:[ Delta-5 Colonel] [ D5-SVFTO ] [ Gamma-9 ' Forseti's Banamaðr ' ] [ Director of The IAA ] [Omega-1 Lieutenant] [Alpha-1 SGT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mean Posted April 13, 2023 Share Posted April 13, 2023 Lore: 25/25 I like how you describe 939 and the small details such as it's height. Presentation: 25/25 i like the format which you used for this document , it's unique , clear and easily readable. Creativity: 20/25 I like the small details in this document such as the stolen document thing you did on the 2nd half , There's not much i can criticise creativity wise so well done! Grammar: 20/25 Your grammar is probably the weakest point in this document however it still is decent , I would recommend the use of more commas / periods to make your sentences more coherent :) Final grade: 90/100 This is an extremely well made document from someone who is an OA thus i applaud you for your effort! Current : SEC JFTO 2LT Mean / WD Tessarius Flavia MAGIFormer : RND HFTO ARCH Mean / V1 Griffith I / CI 2LT Mean / E-11 DoCE MSGT Mean / RRH Analyst X ray 23 / D5 DHFTO 2LT Mean / MTF G9 Jötunn GD4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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