TheAmericanMan22 Posted March 5, 2023 Share Posted March 5, 2023 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e9duPV3CEW424JpS-iK93PjmJ3nEUGZ369TFgobf8j4/edit?usp=sharing Best viewed on a computer for my log format. Enjoy my 173 test log. Current: Owner of "Freedom Fighters" CC | Platnium Donator Rank | Professional Gun Lover | Certified American Former: SCP:RP Moderator | Security DHFTO 2LT American | MTF NU7 SM | Chaos Insurgency R&D AIN | Chaos Insurgency Military PVT | Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Shrimpifyed Posted March 16, 2023 Share Posted March 16, 2023 (edited) On 3/5/2023 at 4:14 PM, TheAmericanMan22 said: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e9duPV3CEW424JpS-iK93PjmJ3nEUGZ369TFgobf8j4/edit?usp=sharing Best viewed on a computer for my log format. Enjoy my 173 test log. Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25 Lore seemed accurate and on point, no further judgement here. Creativity: 15/25 I like how the Agent flew to 173 and brought him back to base but the tests themselves were pretty basic. Presentation: 20/25 The format is original and use of images definitely makes it look better. I also like the identification sequence at the start. Though lacks color which makes it feel bland. Writing: 20/25 Spelling and grammar was fine but there were some punctuation errors. I also felt that some words were repeated to often like "Upon" being used 4 times in one paragraph. Overall Grade: 80/100 B- Notes: I liked how the log didn't take place in one spot and was changed multiple times but I would suggest thinking of more creative tests ideas and ones that could benefit CI. Edited March 16, 2023 by Shrimpifyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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