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Test log assigned for grading. Please allow 1-3 Days for a final score.

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Grammar: (6/10)

I saw a lot of grammar mistakes... carry on sentences. punctuation missing. I've seen better logs you've created in the past.

Design: (5.5/10)

The design is harsh on the eyes. It feels more like I'm reading something off the dark web instead of some kind of SCP foundation documentation.

Lore: (7.5/10)

*thumbs up*

Acting/Audio: (8/10)

As an actor I can give credit where credit is due, I think the addition to audio logs in this was a really good move. The voice augmentation for portrayals of different characters was a nice touch and the fact I felt you immerse yourself in your role.

TOTAL: 6.75/10

 

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