Sushi Chef Posted March 15, 2023 Share Posted March 15, 2023 ello, this is my first time doing this, and i rushed it, and all those good excuses, so please forgive me in advance, please do let me know how i can improve thoughhttps://sites.google.com/view/logic-of-illogic/scp-035-aka-the-possessive-mask Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Shrimpifyed Posted March 15, 2023 Share Posted March 15, 2023 11 hours ago, Sushi Chef said: ello, this is my first time doing this, and i rushed it, and all those good excuses, so please forgive me in advance, please do let me know how i can improve thoughhttps://sites.google.com/view/logic-of-illogic/scp-035-aka-the-possessive-mask Normal Grade: Lore: 23/25 Events that happened before and after the test definitely made it more interesting. Also liked how 035 explained the process of putting on the mask, a nice touch. Creativity: 20/25 Test idea was original and creative but it is unclear how it could have benefitted the Chaos Insurgency. Presentation: 25/25 Love the use the google sites as a database for logs and the style of the log makes it truly look like one you would see in a secretive database. Writing: 25/25 Perfect use of punctuations and no spelling errors. Signs of great grammar. Overall Grade: 93/100 A Notes: A very good test log but maybe try thinking of tests that have the ability to benefit the Chaos Insurgency or just explain how it can in the log itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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