5208 Sons of Soldiers

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1URYZcOVsW-uDEFnYLg0XfOe33lfhnW5qKPgxaqJqc_Q/edit?usp=sharing

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from: Research Assistant Manager Simon Wolffe <[email protected]>

to: Experienced Researcher Kirbee <[email protected]>

Subject: Test Log Grade

 

Good afternoon, Experienced Researcher.

I apologize for the delay in the grading of your test log, I have been unfortunately caught up with my experiments. Your test log grade is attached below

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Formatting: 15/25

I think there's a lot of room to improve with the formatting, you're definitely trying but I'd recommend taking some ideas from some of the tests in the Wanderer's Library, or just from high-scoring logs.

Grammar and punctuation: 20/25

Some minor grammatical / punctuation mistakes from what I see.

Idea: 25/25

No problems with the test idea, I think this is a real test that the Foundation would perform if it existed in the real world.

Quality & Originality: 20/25

This is an original log, however as mentioned in terms of formatting, this log is kind of lacking. I would recommend the following:

1. Taking inspiration from other logs formats (particularly high-scoring ones, you're free to look through the ones I've submitted for some ideas!)

2. Making the text a bit smaller, I think big text leaves little room for pictures which could be great in a log!

3. Adding pictures! Not every test log needs to have them, but I think it's a great way to spice up the log, however you get these pictures isn't really my concern.

4. Using page breaks to separate large chunks of text. The "Test Details" section overflows into the 2nd page which makes it look a bit ugly, using page breaks can really help with this.

Total: 80/100

Good work, we're excited to see more of you.

Kind regards,

Simon Wolffe