Blind Posted October 16, 2022 Share Posted October 16, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vieZB6kFQlh7B45aWYVlkJx7jlKnqL5uqVp-pQqbYsc/ This is my first forums post on research and im only a junior researcher so i hope this goes well Senior Researcher / Experienced Medic / The Theorists Professional Dumbass / RDMRDMRDM / Furry Ha you thought there would be something [REDACTED] here. Trial Moderator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schölinger Posted October 19, 2022 Share Posted October 19, 2022 Your test log has been assigned for grading! Expect a grade in 1-3 days Current: Goofball Former: RnD Delta Command, Foundation Doctor, RFA Agent, RRH Analyst Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domz Posted October 20, 2022 Share Posted October 20, 2022 Test idea - 15/25 - Test idea feels kind of redundant as 999 clearly doesn't have the strength capacity to stop a powerful entity. Grammar - 25/25- No spelling mistakes or grammatical errors that I found. Presentation/format - 18/25- Great format and pleasant page to read on however having a picture of the test and or pictures of other things (eg. SCP , Escorts , Yourself , class D etc.) would be nice. Quality/length - 9/25- Remember that you can put in a few details to spice up the test. Another thing, your document was well written however extremely short so I would like to see that go up in length as your test was extremely short and kind of boring as there was no build up.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Extra note: Wiki: "SCP-999 appears to be a large, amorphous, gelatinous mass of translucent orange slime, weighing about 54 kg (120 lbs) with a consistency similar to that of peanut butter. Subject’s size and shape is easily malleable and can change shape at will" Rascals: "SCP-999 Is an amorphous gelatinous mass composed of an orange slime and has a total weight of 54kg or 120lbs. The subject can change shape at will." These two sentences are getting dangerously close to each other in plagiarism, however this is like copying off a friend and "changing up a little" , Please Please do not copy off the wiki as it can lower your grade mark and ruins the fun of making test documents. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Overall : 67/100 1 FORMER: Foundation Doctor , RFA SIC/OA1 , SEC SFC, WD-V Eqvites Antonius MONK CI DHLS , CI SM , RRH Analyst , D5 MSGT , Maintenance ME "Domz" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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