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1048-A "But, How?"


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Grammar, punctuation, and spelling: 20/25

Reason: Spelling and grammar is fine, but punctuation and spacing could use some work.

Idea: 25/25

Reason: original and overall a great test idea!

Format: 20/25

Reason: good format, but I feel like a better font could be used.

Length: 25/25

Reason: not too short and not too long!

Total score: 90

The Double Barrel Bandit...

Former Ranks: RRH Analyst Echo-39 - G9 Wendigo GF5 - Elite Medic - Deputy Head of Medical Research D5 2nd Lieutenant - Deputy Head Raptor Operative - GOC Private x2 - CI Sergeant - O1 Specialist x2 (first O1 enlisted) - Event Team Executive AWPD Office Manager - RAU Advanced Unit - Advanced Medic - RFA Secretary of Investigations and Counter Intelligence - RAU Sentinel Unit - D5 Sergeant Major Head of Research - CI Captain - EOI Capulet - E4 Goon

CCs owned: Class D Special Forces - Horizon Initiative Legion I II and III Horizon Initiative Apollyon Unit

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