Gorgetted Posted July 20, 2022 Share Posted July 20, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dIGkqwaOtEj_h1A1tZjJB77ng4fwW7Oc49Awaw_Omvs/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gorgetted Posted July 23, 2022 Author Share Posted July 23, 2022 On 7/20/2022 at 6:48 PM, Gorgetted said: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dIGkqwaOtEj_h1A1tZjJB77ng4fwW7Oc49Awaw_Omvs/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domz Posted July 27, 2022 Share Posted July 27, 2022 Please wait 1-3 days for grading FORMER: Foundation Doctor , RFA SIC/OA1 , SEC SFC, WD-V Eqvites Antonius MONK CI DHLS , CI SM , RRH Analyst , D5 MSGT , Maintenance ME "Domz" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lUCI Posted July 28, 2022 Share Posted July 28, 2022 I hate every single fiber of your being for signing this with 'Micheal Afton' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jummy Posted July 29, 2022 Share Posted July 29, 2022 Imagination: 13/25 | I get where you're coming from with this, but it feels like you could have done more with a cross test. Obviously lower ranks have more restrictions, but still maybe go a bit further, include a second test inside the document, something to just flesh it out a bit more. Writing: 15/25 | Well, for starters the lack of commas. Now this isn't a big thing, but as your English Teacher probably said: they help divide sentences into shorter bits, making them easier to read. The lack of clinical tone is also not great, as this can feel like a polite text to a friend rather than a formal document in some areas. Aesthetic: 20/25 | Can't really complain, default format. You did appear to forget the small "DATE" in the upper left corner of one of the pages. Also, it would make this log stand out more if you didn't follow the format to a T. Have some audio logs, maybe change a few colours, etc. Personalization helps show your work easier, and command will certainly appreciate it. Length: 20/25 | As I said, a little more is to be desired, but for such a simple test it's likely better than having it be ten pages of just... nothing. Overall: 68/100, Good. Research Administrator | R.A.U. Commissioner | External Agent 3 "Oyasumi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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