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SCP 682 - Genetic Deconstruction Test / Incident report


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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Su0dgrizeO4GuHLzz_tD7p6OujoV9ls5A4rKzqeDoUA/edit

Additional notes for the reader:

SCP Color coding: Red - Keter, Yellow - Euclid, Green - Safe

Names are colour coded based on rank and during Audio or Video logs sentences are colour coded to the person as well.

Notices of required security clearance are not to be taken seriously by the reader and are done to make the document feel more genuine unless you intend to use the Information in RP. You are free to read Level 4 clearance no matter your own clearance but cannot bring up information from these sections in RP.

Parts of the document that are redacted are done to make it more genuine. You can just highlight the redacted area to read the information. Just don't take any redacted information taken from these sections into RP. 

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Typography

4/5

I didn't see any mistakes in grammar, other than some run on sentences.

 

Presentation

4/5

The format and use of images is very nice. Consistency in font would be nice though.

 

Creativity

5/5

Genetic Deconstruction? That is one of the coolest ideas to date, love it.

 

Writing

3/5

Seemed kind of mushed together, but not bad. Also an actual conclusion would be nice.

 

Lore

4/5

Nothing majorly against the SCP lore in the document, would've loved the link to the document mentioned at the beginning though.

 

Overall

20/25 (80%)

Pretty good log! Also, you can use this on an RFA application if you'd like!

 

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