Dareth Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1d-JIkCTIotC3IKCgQR1z4sCRNwYl5bfrR0FJ7J9JC-Y/edit?usp=sharing My first time making something like this so feedback is very welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamamo Nugs Posted February 6, 2022 Share Posted February 6, 2022 Not really here to grade your test, but the formatting is pretty rough. Having a white paper with colored text is harder to read than with a black paper with colored text. Also, I'm not really sure what your coloring is for when it comes to the relationship between the thing you colored and the color. In one of my text logs, the colors were coordinated: D-Class were colored orange, SCP's were colored based off their class, and MTF/GenSec/Other personnel were colored based off their color in-game. I also colored based off of good outcomes and bad outcomes (green being good, red being bad, yellow being meh). Green and yellow also referred to ideas I had (yellow being an idea, green being the actual outcome I expected.) However, when I look at this doc, I dont see any coordination in the coloring. Researcher is green, SCP is red, the word "it" was red, you made every "I" and "Me" green, and you made GenSec blue? I mean, typing it out like that made it easier to understand. SCP is red cause its the SCP you're testing on, "I", "Me", and Researcher was green because that was you, and Gensec was colored in blue cause it was your escort, but that doesn't really work out. The one part about the color coding that works out, though, is D class, but that's about it. TL;DR, If you're gonna color code, try to do it in a way that's more descriptive instead of in a way for identification. We know who you are, we know who the escort was, and we know what the SCP is. SR APRF Drappier / Agent Bvvonus EX2 / MA NCS DrappierCI SGT FTO CQOB Bobbithball man (Class D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dareth Posted February 6, 2022 Author Share Posted February 6, 2022 4 minutes ago, Tamamo Nugs said: Not really here to grade your test, but the formatting is pretty rough. Having a white paper with colored text is harder to read than with a black paper with colored text. Also, I'm not really sure what your coloring is for when it comes to the relationship between the thing you colored and the color. In one of my text logs, the colors were coordinated: D-Class were colored orange, SCP's were colored based off their class, and MTF/GenSec/Other personnel were colored based off their color in-game. I also colored based off of good outcomes and bad outcomes (green being good, red being bad, yellow being meh). Green and yellow also referred to ideas I had (yellow being an idea, green being the actual outcome I expected.) However, when I look at this doc, I dont see any coordination in the coloring. Researcher is green, SCP is red, the word "it" was red, you made every "I" and "Me" green, and you made GenSec blue? I mean, typing it out like that made it easier to understand. SCP is red cause its the SCP you're testing on, "I", "Me", and Researcher was green because that was you, and Gensec was colored in blue cause it was your escort, but that doesn't really work out. The one part about the color coding that works out, though, is D class, but that's about it. TL;DR, If you're gonna color code, try to do it in a way that's more descriptive instead of in a way for identification. We know who you are, we know who the escort was, and we know what the SCP is. thanks for the feedback 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adams the research one Posted February 9, 2022 Share Posted February 9, 2022 Test log assigned for grading, please wait 1-3 days for final grade "Read Lesearcher" Former ranks: Research Administrator + Professor RRH Analyst Zulu 99CCs The Patrol Officer (Owner) Snowmen (Owner) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eyelander Posted February 12, 2022 Share Posted February 12, 2022 Final Grade: 80/100Observations are pretty good Background research is also good Format is lacking Color text on a white background is very hard to read |retired dhor/meritorious service award recipient||former CI 1lt/sm and E4 C2||Rho 36 Shaman| "For the day I die, imma touch the sky" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Avalon Levi Posted February 15, 2022 Share Posted February 15, 2022 On 2/12/2022 at 11:46 AM, Eyelander said: Final Grade: 80/100Observations are pretty good Background research is also good Format is lacking Color text on a white background is very hard to read Indeed, Color text on a white background is very hard to read!!! "So do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God" ~ Isaiah 41:10Currently: Head Of Research | HOSM Sub-Zero | Ghost OA0 | Emeritus Professor | R.A.U Grand Commissioner Former: Security 1LT | Medical Supervisor | Moderator | Event Team Member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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