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SCP-294-Ψ Anomalous Materials Research


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Grade: 80 (B)

Lore: 20/20
Good on lore here.
Creativity: 15/20
I would have loved if you had gone into a little bit more depth on how you either knew that these specific drinks existed for 294 and a little bit more into the testing on the d class personnel with these drinks but meh there's always next log for these things.
Presentation: 15/20
You could have made the background something other than pure white for example a SCP log style background would have looked cool
Writing: 30/40
Noticed a few spelling mistakes
Note: I would love to see a part 2 of this explaining all of the things that went unexplained in this one (like the things in my notes in the creativity section) and also further experimentation on these things

Foundation Doctor,
FORMER E11 CPT

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