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Lore: 20/20

Follows the lore quite well. No issues there.


Creativity:  20 /20 

Very creative. Not much else to say here

 

Presentation: 15 /20

Standard document. There could be some images or diagrams or something else. This document is begging for a photo of some kind. Other than that its just plain text on a white background.


Writing: 35/40

No grammar issues or spelling. Im taking points off for how short it is. There is lots of room to expand here but the length the document is now i cant give it full points.

 

TOTAL: 90/100

Grade: A

 

overall: OwO

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