Protege Posted February 19, 2020 Share Posted February 19, 2020 Unknown user please enter login code User: Protégé Password: *Protégé noises* Login code accepted welcome user Protégé Enter command: Access file Project Blood Relatives Retrieving file... File found File: Project Blood Relatives Enter command: Unlock file Project Blood Relatives Unlocking file... Error please insert password *Protégé noises* Password accepted File unlocked Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Light Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 Grade: Standard 86/100 Lore: 15/20 This concept would work in a way I think you could have tweaked it a little bit more to fit the lore better. Creativity: 20/20 I have never seen someone conduct these tests before. Presentation: 13/20 I mean it's ok you did follow the format but I wished there was some color and/or pictures in it. Writing: 38/40 Everything is good but I see a few mistakes. Former "Foundation Doctor and a Medical Doctor are 2 god damn different things." -Light "Can you heal me."-Entire Foundation "Ok Sophia"-Arium Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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