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Breen

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  1. On 3/20/2020 at 6:10 PM, Hannah said:

    fuck i read this thing wrong  

    but anyways -support due to the  owner who paid for   this it is extremely unfair for them  to pass owner ship  to  some one for free i think its only fair  the person paid   half of what the owner paid for       and once again this takes money out of zeeptins business  and takes funds away  from the community and  getting Rid Of inactive owners custom classes  gives  the server more space , just buy your own custom class and you will have nothing to worry about :3

    this is the worst take I have ever seen

     

    +support people who have paid $20 should not be punished because the owner is inactive

  2. Score: 99.5/100 

    Grade: A+

    Lore: 20/20

    Follows SCP-173's lore well. 173 does in fact move fast/move in a way that is undetectable to human perception. 

    Creativity: 20/20

    Probably the most unique 173 test I have seen. I don't think anyone has had the idea to try and see how 173 moves without just trying to throw up a camera.

    Presentation: 20/20 

    Well crafted test log, looks nice, formatted nicely. Information is organized well and categories are clear and sum up the information in them very well.

    Writing: 39.5/40

    Two grammar errors, forgot a ' in would've and used the wrong its.

    QUALITY

  3. Score: 84/100 

    Grade: B-

    Lore: 20/20

    I guess 20/20 because SCP-173 does in fact produce feces and blood in its cell.  

    Creativity: 5/20

    This isn't really a creative test, it's like asking if licking the sidewalk will make you sick. Not been done before though.

    Presentation: 20/20

    Well crafted test log, looks nice, formatted nicely. Information is organized well and categories are clear and concise.  

    Writing: 39/40

    Few grammar errors like lowercase i's and using the wrong it's.

    STANDARD

  4. Sorry if this is not the right place, please move it if it is not. 

    The steam account displayed on my forums profile has not been the name I have had for a few months now, and it will not update. I have gone into the steam settings of my forums account and updated it multiple times but it just will not change. Can anyone help me out with this because I hate the steam name it displays and want my current one.

  5. Score: 95/100 

    Grade: A+

    Lore: 20/20

    Follows lore well. SCP-999 does indeed leave gel as it moves around and eats candy. Not much to say here. 

    Creativity: 15/20

    Creative application of SCP-999's gel, similar to the ballistic gel used to represent humans in crash testing and testing weapons. However, I wish you had gone more in-depth on how you would apply scp-999's gel as armor more, the current test and analysis seems kind of vague. 

    Presentation: 20/20 

    followed the format well, the document is well organized and I like that you added extra sections to improve on the test log.

    Writing: 40/40

    minor spelling errors, but not enough to impact the grade.

    QUALITY

  6. Your in game name: Breen

    Your Steam ID: STEAM_0:1:78650607

    The player's in game name: Big Patrick & Sam Hyde

    The player's steam ID (required): STEAM_0:1:116182876 (Patrick) & STEAM_0:1:526148809 (Sam)

    What did the player do: Mass player diss, staff diss, mass homophobia, racism

    Evidence (required): https://imgur.com/a/mm6SO4P

    What do you believe should happen to the player: A ban

    Any extra information: went off like this after we demoted him off research trainee. Sam came along after Patrick was  muted.

    patrick was just banned for a week

  7. Score: 38/100 

    Grade: F-

    Lore: 10/20 

    The only part that followed lore was that 1048 pretty much cuts things pretty much, the rest is just wrong and is contradicted by SCP-1048's case file

    Creativity: 0/20

    The question in this experiment can literally be answered by reading SCP-1048's case file

    Presentation: 8/20 

    At least you followed the format. No formatting text, just a plain forums post, quite minimal sections. 

    Writing: 20/40

    No spelling or grammar errors, but there is barely anything written. When writing a test log you should go for more than just a single sentence per section.

    SUBSTANDARD

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