Ein Posted March 27, 2023 Share Posted March 27, 2023 FEDERAL BUREAU OF INVESTIGATIONS UNUSUAL INCIDENTS UNIT NOW ACCESSING CASE FILE FILE #: 2006-04-09 "BLOOD LAKE" An SCP-354 Project Inspired by Project: Icebreaker & Dr. Ternith Plague Project: Odysseus Hub RETIRED Security Colonel / Warden Legate / Juggernaut Enforcer / Research Administrator / M.A.D. Site Operations Chief / RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain / Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director / MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal / Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic / R&D Scientist / Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major / Enforcer Squadron Lead "We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gigazet Posted March 28, 2023 Share Posted March 28, 2023 Grammar/Writing: 25/25 No issues apparent. Creativity: 25/25: Creativity is on point, the back story of the project definitely helped with reading it and I enjoyed all of the instances and events recorded. Lore: 25/25: Felt like I was learning about the blood lake for the first time, definitely a fun read and want to see more lore in the future for how you progress the story. Length/Format: 25/25 Great length, wonderful formatting, I am a stickler for redacted tape looking nice and I love how it looks in this document! Total: 100/100 Would love to see more of your project in the future! Always feel free to ping me updates to your story. - RAS Gigazet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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