Septhis Posted March 26, 2023 Share Posted March 26, 2023 https://sites.google.com/d/1Ka34uoxq31o9mglLkYBatLSIb_L2wuXC/p/1yU-37YGbtcbixHbzDPuvMmGBT7myQcUV/edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrimpifyed Posted March 27, 2023 Share Posted March 27, 2023 On 3/25/2023 at 10:57 PM, Septhis said: https://sites.google.com/d/1Ka34uoxq31o9mglLkYBatLSIb_L2wuXC/p/1yU-37YGbtcbixHbzDPuvMmGBT7myQcUV/edit Normal Grade: Lore: 25/25. Nothing seems to conflict with the lore of the SCP and follows the wiki well. Creativity: 17/25. I like the idea of doing a off-site test but the test itself was kind of unoriginal for the SCP. It is also unclear how this could benefit the Insurgency. Presentation: 20/25. The document looks nice but lacks some of the features that make logs stand out instead of it just being the before, during, and after tests. Grammar: 20/25. Overall it was good but some sentences felt to long and I had to re-read some of them just to understand them. Final Grade: 82/100 Notes: Overall a good log but lacks some key features that really make logs stand out like the identification sequence before opening the log. I would also suggest try making an original idea for a test so it would surprise the grader instead of replicating a normal test. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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