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Project "Mechanical Zombie"


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RETIRED

 Security Colonel Warden Legate Juggernaut Enforcer Research Administrator M.A.D. Site Operations Chief RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic R&D Scientist  Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major Enforcer Squadron Lead

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Grammar/writing: 25/25  - Saw no grammar mistakes when I read it

Creativity/Execution: 21/25 -  I liked the idea of the test but you could have told the one Class D to do something or anything like that.

 

Lore: 19/25 -  You could have added a bit more lore usage in the test and maybe make up a backstory on the clockworks D class


Length/Format: 17/25 - The format was alrightyou could have added a bit more details here and there, And the length wasn't the longest, it is best if you added more details like I said before.

 

Extra points:  0/1 (This is given when I really enjoyed and loved reading the document 90+)

TOTAL: 82/100 Good first log try adding more details next time

Signed: R.S Ghost

 

 

 

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