PixelatedPancakes Posted February 17, 2023 Share Posted February 17, 2023 (edited) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XxZ7Tk5pgC3LltNeeBBJ4OqP-_kZFZNB5lAFhiswqJc/edit Edited February 18, 2023 by Mangoo Current : Former : Nu7 COL, HSU Founder (I wrote the SOP so I'm very important clearly), Nu7 MAJ x 2, E11 2LT, SCP Senior Mod, TTT SA, JvS Admin, TS Support 3, HSU Commissar (), RRH Guardian 01 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ein Posted February 20, 2023 Share Posted February 20, 2023 from: crius.aic <[email protected]> to: Junior Researcher Gerald Vox <[email protected]> Subject: AUTOMATIC NOTICE - LOG ASSIGNED FOR GRADING Your test log, "SCP-173 Test Log | Gerald Vox" has been assigned for grading. Please wait 1-3 days to receive a grade. RETIRED Security Colonel / Warden Legate / Juggernaut Enforcer / Research Administrator / M.A.D. Site Operations Chief / RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain / Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director / MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal / Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic / R&D Scientist / Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major / Enforcer Squadron Lead "We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ein Posted February 22, 2023 Share Posted February 22, 2023 from: Research Assistant Manager Simon Wolffe <[email protected]> to: Junior Researcher Gerald Vox <[email protected]> Subject: Test Log Grade Format: 20/25 The format is definitely unique from other test logs, I think it could definitely go somewhere if it had a little bit of tweaking. I think the use of outlines on your images, and generally better "dividing" the information will make this a stellar test format (You can always refer to other test logs for reference) Grammar & Punctuation: 25/25 I found no issues with grammar in this log. Test Idea: 25/25 Definitely a neat idea, I think this is something the foundation would actually try had it existed in real life. It's a very good question and I can't really tell you much about any improvements. Quality & Originality: 25/25 It's an original test log, what can I say. Additionally, the language & word choice used in the log is pretty nice. Overall Score: 95/100 Certainly a good log, my only concern is the formatting because it just looks weird. I'd recommend making use of page breaks, adding outlines to your images, and once again feel free to take ideas from other test logs. I think you've got a bright future ahead of you, Researcher. Kind regards, Simon Wolffe RETIRED Security Colonel / Warden Legate / Juggernaut Enforcer / Research Administrator / M.A.D. Site Operations Chief / RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain / Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director / MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal / Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic / R&D Scientist / Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major / Enforcer Squadron Lead "We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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