Wassabi Posted February 5, 2023 Share Posted February 5, 2023 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mg6HCxt69MojpAHZ_tWoRxnmWbDBmZxFuSXs8d_jQlE/edit?usp=sharing [CURRENT] CI SSGT, RnD SVA, CQOP, STS, Apollo Theta Unit, F5 Satan V [FORMER] Nu7 CPL||E11 SSGT => CEO||CI RnD SVA||SEC SM||D5 SSGT => CTF ESL Pyxis||MA||RRH Engineer Delta 16||RA => RFA Freyja PA1||Senior Mod||Chief Manager => HMR| [CUSTOM CLAN] Global Occult Coalition S-3 Horizon Initiative Legion III [CUSTOM JOBS] MTF Delta-1 [MISC] SILVER ENJOYER // Permanent Guns: Trench Knife, Karambit Black Laminate, Hatchet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ein Posted February 12, 2023 Share Posted February 12, 2023 This log has been assigned for grading! Please wait 1-3 days to receive a grade! RETIRED Security Colonel / Warden Legate / Juggernaut Enforcer / Research Administrator / M.A.D. Site Operations Chief / RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain / Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director / MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal / Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic / R&D Scientist / Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major / Enforcer Squadron Lead "We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ein Posted February 12, 2023 Share Posted February 12, 2023 Format: 20/25Same concerns as your previous log. Simply a bit "bland" with no uniqueness to it, could use some adjustments (refer to my previous grade on Log #4 for reference) Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 24/25Same concerns as your previous log. The overall flow of the log is a little weird, however there seems to be some improvement here in terms of flow. Once again, I'd recommend paraphrasing and looking at the grade I gave you on Log #4 for reference Idea, Quality and originality: 35/50 I combined the Ideas section with this one Significant improvement from your previous log in this aspect, the memetic kill agent aspect fits, and makes sense as that's probably what SCP-079 would do. Additionally, the inclusion of the image is neat. This log is also entirely original once again Total score: 79/100 Once again, I'm excited to see more of you, I'd recommend looking at my feedback on Log #4 (As I've already stated twice) for reference on how to improve. RETIRED Security Colonel / Warden Legate / Juggernaut Enforcer / Research Administrator / M.A.D. Site Operations Chief / RRA Professor / MTF Delta-5 'Front Runners' Captain / Veteran Raptor Operative / Internal Affairs Agency Assistant Director / MTF Nu-7 'Hammer Down' Captain / Covert Agent / Deputy Head Field Training Officer / UN Global Occult Coalition Corporal / Combat Medic Tactical Paramedic / R&D Scientist / Marksman Recon Specialist / MTF Alpha-1 'Red Right Hand' Major / Enforcer Squadron Lead "We are the first line of defense. We are the first responders tasked to save those in danger. We have the responsibility to ensure the safety and well-being of all staff members. Because of that, you are the bravest men I have ever had the honor to serve with.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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