God Given Eye [Requesting SA n RFA Grading]

[Avalon Levi]

Imagine AvalonStep doing a Foundation Document, how cringe would it be?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/141o7owqzMGv2AimD6Oc1qV8qidEZGqLhj1Ue5Poq-v0/edit?usp=sharing

Edited February 2, 2023 by Avalon Levi

[Above the Law]

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TOTAL GRADE: 74/100 - A really good document. It could use some style changes but overall not terrible! Really enjoyed reading this.

Length 16/25 - The text at the beginning was used to spread out the document which isn't terrible but it is slightly aggravating scrolling through all that loading text.

Creativity: 20/25  - I didn't really see a test idea, it looked more like a backstory but of course I may be wrong.

Presentation: 15/25 - The plain white background makes it hard to read the brighter colored text. There's also some formatting errors here and there but nothing significant.

Writing: 22/25 - Really good writing. Loved how you used an SCP that's not on site.

Extra Point + 1: I'm adding an extra point for the way the document was written. Clearly you put time and effort in this document.

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